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 Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 10:31 am
" Melancholy Marionette "
My heart is torn and ripped into shreds,
Beating with the broken songs that I've read.
Tears of your pain run down my cheeks,
You wipe them away but they only repeat.
With store bought hearts I tape them against mine,
Each patch represents a love that has died.
I've been by your side and waiting for the day,
You'd finally come and whisk me away.
I finally realize that I am not all me,
My clinging to you has made it unhealthy.
I'm am only a doll that sits by your side,
You'll never realize that my heart is not mine.
I've molded it using paper mache,
And rested it on your lap to see what you say.
But these cold fingers on this winter day,
Ask you to please notice me and take my pain away...
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 5:07 pm
Wow... intense and oh so true for so many. I can relate to this poem very well and love it a lot.
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 6:58 pm
I've been trying to find a way to say these feeling for a longggggggggg time! Good thing I wrote this. But I really love this poem and " Wishing for Twilight" the most! Thank you, onee-chan!*huggy*
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 7:40 pm
I love your poems, but it's really hard for me to relate.
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 8:26 pm
Oh, Well I'm really happy you like them!
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 8:45 pm
You're welcome. I'm glad with your positive feedback with my past poems.
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