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 Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 9:34 am
As another nock echos,
She sinks to the floor
In hopes someone will answer,
Someone will stall...
Seconds pass till his face appears,
Yet she can't understand
Why his eyes shed tears,
She hadn't lied,
Nor had she died.
Unknown to her,
He was troubled to see
The cuts bleeding deep,
Laughing at the struggle
He couldn't possibly repeat.
The pain it burned as
It sunk in this time:
To see her slipping,
Bruises and all,
Was something he could
Hardly bear.
The tears began to flow
As she spoke his name.
Tossing and turning within his mind,
He took it all in,
Hating the ones who had hurt
His angel in such a way.
She knew not of the love
He felt in that instant,
Hopping to banish the pain
Or erase her memory with
His heart alone.
To lift and carry was all he could do,
Before laying with her
To comfort a broken
Mind, body, soul...
Minutes passed as she shook
From the trama,
Listening to the lull of his voice
Pulled her into a painfull slumber.
Watching her sleep,
Helpless and weak,
His thoughts topped the charts
As his heart starts to beat.
The years seemed to span
A hundred or so,
As he thought of all the moments
They'd shared and
The one's they would sow.
Yet the question remained:
Who could have touched
An angel this way?
Taking her dignity,
Painting it black and blue,
Something none should do.
Yet there she lies,
Shattered within,
Hoping in her sleep
No one will see in,
But the boy holds her tight and
Somehow sees all,
For his heart is the one
That could one day mend all...
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 12:42 pm
Amazing, it left me speechless.
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 4:36 pm
Ok. You totally shattered me. This is amazing, and I feel it deeply.
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 10:18 pm
;.; I love your writing so much Mimi. I'm going to have to stop reading it because it always breaks my heart.
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 2:48 am
Very sad. Amazing but sad.... Great work. needs spell checked though.
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Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 11:30 am
@ Scazarith Not all of my stuff is heart breaking I promise smile
@ Everyone Thanks for the feed back, glad ya'll liked it, even through the spelling errors xd
This one in particular represents how some of my closest guy friends have taken me in and helped me cope with the pain of having a bipolar dad, a mom who turns my dad against me and my siblings during his manic times, an abusive ex-fiance and dealing with nightmares about crap that happened when I was 9.
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