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Aching Waves (G)

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Nuclear_Popcorn

PostPosted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 6:28 pm


A beat pulses withing my skull
Emanating from some unknown source
Coming from everywhere
It captures my thoughts
Replacing consciousness with barely lucid dreams
Rhythmic throbbing
Consuming time itself
One seems to drift away from being
Taken with the aching waves
That lap at my senses
With gentle pulsing pain
There is no relief
No reprieve
From my interminable
Headache
PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 2:13 pm


Fantastic! It was brilliantly written. Lots of good words. I can liken this unto my headaches, actually. It seems to put words to them quite accurately.

Harpe Eolienne

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