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 Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 7:26 pm
what is precious?
what is precious to me?
what about you?
what about the rest?
some live there lives day to day,
saying you are precious to me,
or that thing is precious to me,
would you die for them?
would you die for it?
precious to me is something worth dieing for,
something for which your very life may depend upon,
you cant live without it,
you need it,
you would risk everything to protect it,
some risk their lives for others,
some risk their lives for themselves,
some for something that others would see as trash,
all for the same reason,
the need it,
they want it with all their hearts,
whats precious to you?
whats precious to them?
what precious to me?
i know whats precious to me,
my friends,
my book,
and you...
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Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 9:26 pm
I like your poems, most wouldn't think they are anything because they aren't written how the stereo-types describe poetry (don't worry my poetry is the same way, I think), but I like your poetry cuz every single one leaves me thinking of what I consider important in my life. That is why your work is great.
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 4:07 am
thanks, i choose not to really follow any popular trends, or do what every one else does... i do what i do because i want to do it, no other reason, same goes with poetry...
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