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High School Dramatized To The Maximum

Chiarunmae

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Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 9:37 pm

A boy sits on the bus to school half asleep. He was a third year student in high school. His grades were exceptional. Not the highest but he never failed. Never really focused on friends though quite a few people knew him. Never had a girlfriend and wasn't mocked for it. He was just trying to live out his life without any distractions. The only thing he ever took an interest in was fighting in which he took tae kwon do and wushu classes. His name was Ewan Oroi.

Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:43 pm

The bus finally arrives at it's destination and Ewan takes it upon himself to walk the rest of the way. As he walks he notices someone he knows walking up to him.

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"Oh great I didn't expect to see you this early..." He sighs drastically. "To what do I owe the pleasure?"

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The girl, Aya Tsurugi, adjusts her glasses, blushing slightly," Well... uhm... I was just... wondering if... you did your homework..."

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"You know I haven't... so why do you even ask..."

"Well... i was... wondering.... if you'd like to.... copy mine..." She blushes more then shouts out, "But if you don't want to you don't have to!"
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He laughs and says,"Sure I'll take your offer." He takes her paper and sits at a bench and starts to write. "I don't know what she sees in me..."

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Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 2:23 pm

Please do not put polls in this forum dear. We have a poll forum no need for them anywhere else. Thanks. Your poll has been removed.

Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 9:40 am

Is there more to this story or is that it? I like the way it started but it leaves you wanting more. crying

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Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2008 11:18 am

Wow this is so cute smile Kind of reminds me of well me ^-^

Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:26 am

Oh, gosh. I don't want to say anything mean, so I'll give you some concrit that I have been given. It's a bit wordy, hun. Also, while you get top marks for grammar, the story isn't very... interesting, to say the least. With a bit of work, I do think that I would be eying the bookshelves at my local bookstore and waiting for your story to appear. Please, please don't be mad, that's not what I'm aiming for. It's a good first-try, I know I have written loads of stuff like this. But, y'know, keep reading, keep writing, 'cause you can always improve. biggrin