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Tesunie
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 9:38 pm


Get your advice on Character Creation here.

Post your character's profiles and anything else that might not appear on their profiles here for other people to review and comment on. There is no reason to hide anything about your character here, for you want honest opinions on your character, which means we need to know as much as we can.

If you want to post your profile as an example and do not wish to see comments on, please let us know at the top of your profile post in LARGE text.

I shall once more state that if you can not state your opinion in a reasonable and friendly manner, then please don't post at all. This is to help present flaws and present options and thoughts not originally thought of by the character's creator to help the character. This is not a character bashing contest and is not pedestal for characters.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 9:41 pm


Some links to places where some information on character creation already exists. Please use this material for your profiles as well.

Character Creation Help:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=8049969

Making a believable character:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=6830513

Profiles and what they're for:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=13919957

Character Journals:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=13920101

Tesunie
Captain

15,100 Points
  • Flatterer 200
  • Peoplewatcher 100
  • Bunny Hoarder 150

Tesunie
Captain

15,100 Points
  • Flatterer 200
  • Peoplewatcher 100
  • Bunny Hoarder 150
PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 9:48 pm


I guess I shall go first, so everyone can poke and laugh at my profile. This character is from a rather dead role play, ignoring the role plays name of Die. Gee, I should have linked the profile to the role play's thread. Oh well... I went lazy there for a moment.

Tesunie
For the role play: Die... (No really, I am talking about the role play... no I don't want you to die... I SAID... never mind... mrgreen )

Gaia Username:
Tesunie
Character Name:
Wizzle
Age:
12
Gender:
Male
Race:
Human
Appearance:
Is short, but also hasn't finished growing yet. His still has many characteristics of a child, and may be suffering from delayed growth. This could be due to the environment he has lived in so far, finding food where and when he can. He has had to live on his own for many years in the desolate ruins that was once a city. He defends himself with a power armor he salvaged from a battle once fought against the murderous machines. He has customized the exo-suit to fit his smaller size.

He has dirty blond hair and hazel eyes. Some freckles are on his face as as well, making him looks even younger than he really is. At a quick glance, people would think that he was only 6 years old. His eyes always seem to be glazed over, almost like he is in shock, though he notices things that most would never even see. He is very smart, and likes to fix stuff. For him, fixing stuff is his way out of the situation he is currently in.
Short Bio:
When he was very young, his parents where killed in an attack. He has sense been wondering around on his own, not trusting anyone but himself. He has seen many dead bodies in his short time, and don't even flinch when he sees any. He has never had any fun, or other happy feelings sense the deaths of his parents. when they died, so did his heart.
Weapon of choice:
He has a heavy exo-suit, salvaged from an old fight. It has some offencive power, but is mostly useful for its enhanced strength. Wizzle changed a few parts of the design, to make it fit his small frame. He also maintains the repair job on this unit, and seems to be naturally gifted at fixing stuff.
Personality:
After the death of his parents at the hand of the mechanical menace, Wizzle has become very withdrawn. He trust no one, or very few people. He has no friends, and doesn't socialize with anyone unless forced into it. He doesn't talk very much, and when he does it is kept short and to the point. He has a very dazed look in his eyes at all times, almost like he is still in shock from the deaths of his parents.


Do remember that profiles don't always carry all the information of the character, but it should carry most of it. Please, comment or post your own profiles.
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