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 Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 11:18 am
I want to be,
your Julliet,
and be the one,
you can't forget.
You can be,
my Romeo,
and be the one,
I can't let go
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Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 12:00 pm
Cute and short, I like it. Though, I do advise using 'want to,' instead of 'wanna.'
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Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 11:53 am
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Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 3:31 pm
It's short but well spoken. I like it.
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 1:46 pm
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Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:02 am
Stelle Cadenti Cute and short, I like it. Though, I do advise using 'want to,' instead of 'wanna.' I think if she uses wanna it makes it more personal. Sometimes perfect--or even funtional grammar--is needed. I did like the poem though.
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 1:08 am
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:54 pm
It's simple and the feelings come straight from the heart,
nothing more can be asked. Simple and beautiful
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 5:24 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 4:12 pm
Stelle Cadenti Cute and short, I like it. Though, I do advise using 'want to,' instead of 'wanna.' Depending on the situation or how you want people to percieve it, "wanna" would be acceptable. However, in this case its because in the poem "wanna" is never found. Cute usually isnt my style but its admorable.
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