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 Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 5:02 pm
how fickle we are,
the race of humans,
we jump here and there saying we need this or that,
using words for different purposes than they were meant,
i love this,
i love that,
i love you,
no i love her,
meaning things we don't,
saying things we shouldn't,
saying things never meant to say,
never saying things that should be said,
why are we they way we are?
do we take pleasure at pain?
do we inflict pain on others for our own enjoyment?
do we inflict pain upon ourselves for the same reason?
"we are perfect",
"we are made in the gods image",
no one is perfect,
if we are made after the gods then they themselves are imperfect,
we should not say things we dont mean,
don't mean with all our hearts,
to live life with no regrets,
that is all we can really hope to accomplish,
to leave our mark on this planet,
be it biologically or historically,
we will all be forgotten eventually...
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Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 8:34 pm
I like it, a bit repetitive in some parts, but it's good.
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Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 9:00 pm
I think this is my favorite of your writings as of late. ^.^ Good job.
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Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 8:01 pm
I love most of your work mostly because it has great meaning behind it and makes you think while feeling relaxed.
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