ahhh, awesome~
I love your OC, hun
Very crazy (in a good way)
xd I drew you some red lines so that you could see what I'm talking about more easily
1) His elbows were spread too far apart. If you make the arm motions that he's making, you'll tend to find that your elbows point more forward.
2) His hands; when grasping most long, cylindrical objects (that sounds so wrong) that you swing, one hand usually goes over the other to give more power to the swing (for example golfing, and baseball) and the same holds true with swords. Also, since I made his hands go one over the other, I had to elongate the hilt (and then by ratio the sword) so that he wouldn't be slicing his hands open.
3) His torso looked good, I just mapped out the inside so that I could understand what was going on underneath his man-sized shirt and jacket
xd 4) His right leg (our left) was at an extremely awkward and improbible angle, so I moved it to a more confortable position that would give his swing more power.
5) His left leg (our right) was bent backwards just a little too much to be confortable, and that corresponding foot then looked too far back as well, so I moved that forward too.
But everything else is sweet lookin', babe
Your OC's style's so kickin'~!
3nodding 
His name is Vincent Valos and his still being put together but i still like drawing him , anyways Criticing would be very helpful and red lines and such too 
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