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 Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 7:00 pm
I've realized something is wrong but I don't know where and I need help...  Thanks in advance! surprised
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:20 am
the eyes.. is she suppose to be looking in to the camera or just forward from were she is standing? if she is looking in to the camera than her eye stage left or our right needs to move to our right a little.. I am not saying the entire eye here.. just the cornea and pupil.
but if she is to look straight on then her right eye our left needs to move to the left a bit.. again just the cornea and pupil..
that is what i see. everything else looks good :3
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:40 am
Wow~!
Everything's looking really awesome, babe
The thing that's probably throwing you off is your line work.
It's extremely choppy.
I'd say (if you have your line-art on a serperate layer) then make that layer's opacity lower
if not, or even if you do
I's also say to make a new layer above all of the color and set it to multiply then make a new, smoother outline in a brown color for the skin, and a black for the black.
This should really help to make it more professional looking.
(if you didn't understand anything I just said, let me know and I can make a tutorial for you)
But it's still a lovely drawing, hun~!
The coloring is superb~
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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 2:36 am
Thank you two! <3
Also, I'm just wondering if she looks chubby or pregnant, because I got some of those comments on another forum; if so, how can I fix that? I don't really see that mistake right now. ><
Oh and, the way that the colouring on the skin looks "dirty," does it? o-o;; I'm still learning ways to colour and I'm kind of having trouble with it. Any advices?
Thanks in advance! xD
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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 10:09 am
moonrabbit78 Thank you two! <3 Also, I'm just wondering if she looks chubby or pregnant, because I got some of those comments on another forum; if so, how can I fix that? I don't really see that mistake right now. >< Oh and, the way that the colouring on the skin looks "dirty," does it? o-o;; I'm still learning ways to colour and I'm kind of having trouble with it. Any advices? Thanks in advance! xD If you ask me she doesn't look pregnant at all. Chubby a little, but that's only because it looks slightly chibified. But if it's not, chubby is good. And your colouring isn't that dirty in all honesty, blur it a little and it should be fine. biggrin
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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 11:24 am
moonrabbit78 Thank you two! <3 Also, I'm just wondering if she looks chubby or pregnant, because I got some of those comments on another forum; if so, how can I fix that? I don't really see that mistake right now. >< Oh and, the way that the colouring on the skin looks "dirty," does it? o-o;; I'm still learning ways to colour and I'm kind of having trouble with it. Any advices? Thanks in advance! xD Yes, I agree with mimi.
She does not look fat and/or chubby at all, she looks natural (which is most likely why others thought she was chubby, because they have been brain-washed by the usually anorexic-looking anime characters).
Also, it's just the rough line work that is making the color "dirty" looking, because the shades themselves make her look very clean and well-groomed.
3nodding
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Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 5:18 pm
Thank you everyone! <333
I feel a lot better now lol
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