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 Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 6:24 pm
pulled,
pulled,
pulled this way and that,
everywhere we go emotion pulls us,
work for happiness,
play for joy,
be with another for love,
all a part of are emotions,
everyone has walls,
walls to keep people out,
walls to keep people in,
we let down our walls,
for one reason only,
we become attached,
attached to people,
a certain place,
things we hold dear to our hearts,
is it wrong to love?
would any be mad if i did,
plenty,
plenty of people would,
the person rejects you,
you feel sad,
you want to escape,
what if you could?
would you?
never come out of your mind,
let someone else take over,
to people who can i applaud you,
myself,
i wish to take a break,
let them take over,
let me go!
let me go i say!
i will not be restricted by you,
her,
her i want to e restricted by,
i only wish it were so...
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 7:24 pm
I get the gist (sp?) of what you're saying here. But reading it honesty doesn't make a lot of sense. Its all over the place. On the other hand this isn't a poem written for beauty but for venting, so I feel ya.
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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 3:30 pm
once again you pegged it...
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Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 7:04 pm
I agree with Scazarith. Its all over the place but I loved it. It made scene in a very strange way and I agree with your POV about emotions (specifically love) and trust.
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Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 1:10 pm
i am writing what im feeling... simple as that...
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