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 Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 9:29 pm
;D
It looks like she's walking UP something.
This was an awkward position for the legs/feet that I kind of winged on.
And the hand looks weird. Hrrm.
Plastic bag doesn't look plasticy.
And her clothes aren't interesting. ;_;
And the shoes don't look like shoes xDD;;
((Should I down-size it? O: ))
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 3:05 pm
actually good work , you have a little problems with the body, try to add more back ground it and it will way better than it is.
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 3:17 pm
biggrin so kewl biggrin
it looks good
only change what you think is necessary
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:34 pm
Very awesome!
I love how your trying different views with the figure
very daring
the only problem with doing it from your head is that perspective can get messed up a little
I don't know if you wanted a redline, but here it is any way xd
and then to show where the ground line should be and the emphasize the bag
I changed the position of the leg, because it looked very awkward to me
but only change that if you wish to
also, for future reference
I'd suggest making the pic smaller so that when asking for a critique, those viewing it can see your piece all at once
which is very helpful when analyzing it
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 9:01 pm
Queen.Trickster Very awesome!
I love how your trying different views with the figure
very daring
the only problem with doing it from your head is that perspective can get messed up a little
I don't know if you wanted a redline, but here it is any way xd
and then to show where the ground line should be and the emphasize the bag
I changed the position of the leg, because it looked very awkward to me
but only change that if you wish to
also, for future reference
I'd suggest making the pic smaller so that when asking for a critique, those viewing it can see your piece all at once
which is very helpful when analyzing it
Oh! Thank you for this. Yeah I needed help on the arm and such since it was looking awkward. And thanks for the suggestion of the legs, it looks much better the way you did it. I'll try fixing it if I decide to. O:
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:33 am
KazeNoSano Queen.Trickster Very awesome!
I love how your trying different views with the figure
very daring
the only problem with doing it from your head is that perspective can get messed up a little
I don't know if you wanted a redline, but here it is any way xd
[img]http://i386.photobucket.com/albums/oo309/Zakia_Sun/Snowing_Without_You_by_InuyashaSano.jpg[/img]
and then to show where the ground line should be and the emphasize the bag
[img]http://i386.photobucket.com/albums/oo309/Zakia_Sun/Snowing_Without_You_by_InuyashaS-1.jpg[/img]
I changed the position of the leg, because it looked very awkward to me
but only change that if you wish to
also, for future reference
I'd suggest making the pic smaller so that when asking for a critique, those viewing it can see your piece all at once
which is very helpful when analyzing it
Oh! Thank you for this. Yeah I needed help on the arm and such since it was looking awkward. And thanks for the suggestion of the legs, it looks much better the way you did it. I'll try fixing it if I decide to. O:
no, the arm looks good where it is. And no problem. Besides if you don't feel like fixing this drawing, then it's just something to remember for next time. 3nodding
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