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Xiaa

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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 1:17 pm

The legs are really off, and I think it is because of perspective, but I don't know how to fix it?

Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:34 am

Very cute picture. <3

I think maybe if the leg on the very bottom were moved up towards the pillow a tad, the smaller boy could be on the bed instead of the leg and it'd be less awkward? ;;
I also think the taller boy's other leg could be a little different, to help with perspective. o wo
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Xiaa

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Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 1:54 pm

OH!!! Yeah!!! That's a good idea, I think I know what to do now!

Thanks for your input!!!

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