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Dr. Valentine
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 4:21 pm


but I am doing it anyway

http://deadorworse.net

I'm not posting pictures because I want feedback on the site as well as its contents. There is not much up yet, so:

Preview page.

It's the first page in its current state. I have about 13 pages "done" but I'm planning on redoing the text using this font.

I have a couple of weeks before the comic goes live and I'd appreciate anything you have to say about the site or the comic.

Edit:
Went ahead with the font change.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 11:47 am


I might be stupid. I might be blind. I can't find the next button. And the List all link doesn't work. I thought you had 13 pages? I suggest an obvious next/previous/all/home set of buttons to conform to comic norms.

I think the high contrast (blacks) makes the page look smudged with charcoal. I don't appreciate that. I think tuning the blacks down into dark greys would make the pages more gentle on the eyes.

KingRoach


miserabelle

PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:25 pm


I worry that it's a bit long, it's just about fine on my monitor but I can imagine someone with a smaller screen would have to do a lot of scrolling which would make usability a bit awkward. I'm quite into those guns xx
PostPosted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 10:10 pm


The reason there is no next is because the comic isn't live yet - the small amount of comic linked up there is all that is actually online at the moment.

You think I should soften the blacks? It could be done. I'll try it and see if I like how it works.

miserabelle: I was worried about the same thing, but I don't think that it'd work with shorter pages. Plus, nobody Scores! is fantastic and those comics are looooongcat

Dr. Valentine
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slopii

PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 3:09 am


I think you should have bullets at the bottom of each page to frame the bottom the way you have with the guns at the top.

I like the design well enough but the comic cover needs some work...
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 12:10 pm


I've been watching Endling on deviantART for a while. This guy knows no limits for what is known as a long page. He makes you like it.

KingRoach


cloud20179

PostPosted: Sun Apr 19, 2009 8:53 pm


stupid
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