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 Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 4:01 pm
everlasting life,
the dream of all,
never ending life,
what all seek to possess,
eternal life,
all but non-existent,
all a fairy tail told to children,
but still people chase it,
still they long for it,
to feel the caress of the eons upon them,
the years to pass by be of no more consequence,
death is a mortal worry,
a mortal weakness,
but even life everlasting
life never ending,
life eternal,
would become boring,
nothing to fill the void of years,
nothing by your side but death,
such an empty dream,
such an easily disturbing prospect,
to stand by ageless as the ones you love fall to the years,
love is what fill us,
life is what we must fill with days spent in love,
to ease the pain of life we seek others,
to escape the mortal world of time and space,
even just a little,
with the one we love,
we are immortal
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 10:46 am
This confuses me a bit. You say towards the beginning that there is no such thing as eternal life "all but a fairy tale told to children" but at the end you say "we are immortal". Which is it?
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 12:53 pm
when we are in the presence of the one who we share feelings for we are immortal in the moments we spend with them, not eternal life but, in every moment we spend together we are immortal...
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