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 Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:14 am
" Never Invincible "
The whisper of your words on my skin,
Drawing me closer as I sink within.
My wings are captured by your lullaby,
Hold me close,
Let me drown in your eyes...
I'd always say that I can hold myself up,
I told you that I would never give up.
I've wrestled with my thoughts,
From the deep.
But then you would come,
Just whisper to me,
" Hold me, be free.
I don't want you to drown,
In your invincibility."
So just,
Hold me,
Dress me...
Into your robes,
To hide all of my insecurities.
Tell me,
You love me...
Whisper all the things,
You say,
So you can let my heart free.
Please just,
Be...
Be...
My heart,
My soul,
My love,
My invincibility...
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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:53 pm
crying This is so wonderful misuyume.
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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 4:46 pm
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it! 4laugh
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 7:06 pm
*teary eyed* crying It was written so well. Your appear to prefer writing free verse and you always write it very neat and clean even if the thoughts are all over the palace you do a nice job of tieing it all together.
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 7:26 pm
It has such a flow to it... masterfully done.
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Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 3:52 pm
Yayyyyyyyyyyy! Thank you all, I'm so happy you like it! 4laugh
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