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Tseko the Living Shadow

PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 5:51 pm


as you say,
day to day,
you wait for him,
i'll wait for you,
i know you cant return them,
but i give them to you,
my feelings for you,
they are rightfully yours,
happy around you,
i wont ruin this,
i wont ruin what we have,
friends...
friends...
i want to be more,
i want to be yours,
but that would be selfish,
that would be rude,
neglecting your feelings,
neglecting you for myself,
is there a chance?
could you ever be mine?
i dont know...
i dont know...
the answers to these questions,
they are beyond me,
not for me to know,
to wait,
to wait for you,
that is what i will do...
PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 7:47 pm


As always, bravo!

Requiem of the Exodus


LunarHybrid
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 4:36 pm


I liked it a lot. It was worded and written well. Got redundant in some parts but it worked. Reminds me of how my BF felt about me when I was with my ex.
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