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PostPosted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:29 pm


The proud tree stands tall
It's yellow leaves are falling down
Autumn has begun
PostPosted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 9:56 pm


I love the imagery, Duke. Such a nice haiku, but you have it as 5-8-5, not 5-7-5. xd

The proud tree stands tall (5)
It's ye-llow leaves are fall-ing down (8 )
Au-tumn has be-gun. (5)

Other than that, I love it. smile

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