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Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:16 pm
I'm finally free Of this lonely curse Where no one knows The secrets I hold, The secrets I've told, All those closest to me Now know the hidden truth.
I'm finally free To love this girl In my dreams, To kiss the man Who owns my heart, And Dream of a perfect heaven Filled with only our laughter.
In my eyes I'm finally free, Yet chains of religion Linger in my parents minds, Claiming I'm a sinner Never to see the pearly gaits For my unthinkable sin.
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Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 9:09 am
This poem has an airy feeling to it ^.^ The free part really reminds me of how I was feeling last night, and realized that I've been feeling this way lately. Very nice.
I hope that if this is a true story type poem that things work out for you.
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Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 1:16 pm
I like how you included yourself, your friends, your live, and your parents.
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Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 2:04 pm
very nice... i could really appreciate it...
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