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Finally Free

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LunarHybrid
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:16 pm


I'm finally free
Of this lonely curse
Where no one knows
The secrets I hold,
The secrets I've told,
All those closest to me
Now know the hidden truth.

I'm finally free
To love this girl
In my dreams,
To kiss the man
Who owns my heart,
And
Dream of a perfect heaven
Filled with only our laughter.

In my eyes
I'm finally free,
Yet chains of religion
Linger in my parents minds,
Claiming I'm a sinner
Never to see the pearly gaits
For my unthinkable sin.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 9:09 am


This poem has an airy feeling to it ^.^ The free part really reminds me of how I was feeling last night, and realized that I've been feeling this way lately. Very nice.

I hope that if this is a true story type poem that things work out for you.

Scazarith
Crew


Requiem of the Exodus

PostPosted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 1:16 pm


I like how you included yourself, your friends, your live, and your parents.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 2:04 pm


very nice... i could really appreciate it...

Tseko the Living Shadow

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