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Miyaz

PostPosted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 9:24 am


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PostPosted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 9:27 am


Very...welll, gothic.

Reminds me of Iron Maiden lyrics.

On a critical note, the spacing does make it seem rather simplistic, but that is being pedantic
 

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Miyaz

PostPosted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 9:48 am


Ack!
Gaia wouldn't let me do this, but every second stanza that is in italics should be indented.
gonk

Love is simple.
3nodding
PostPosted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 9:51 am


Ah, but is it?

If it were so simple, then it would be easy to clearly define. Yet, the best definition of love that I can find is 'when you define it, it is no-longer love' and that isn't really a description...
 

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Miyaz

PostPosted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 9:55 am


Haha is it okay to start a discussion on love in a Literature forum?
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Shall we discuss this in the "general" Sticky?
blaugh
PostPosted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 9:57 am


Here is fine, but the sticky is best if you dont want this thread sodomised  

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Miyaz

PostPosted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 9:59 am


General Discussion is fine.
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