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 Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:46 pm
Anything that bothers people in this. It can be about anatomy or anything else (color comp., effects?, ummm... her face and arms... really anything you can think of). Tips (for whatever you find that I have missed) would be great.
The first one is what the picture looked like last year; the bottom one is the re-vamped version mrgreen I'm looking for critique on the second one mostly (because there are way too many flaws in the first one). Please, anything you can give me would be helpful.
See? That's how I improved. I really do learn from you guys. rofl
Original: http://i34.tinypic.com/2ptb6ok.jpg
New Version: http://i34.tinypic.com/zn6fyw.jpg
[ http://necate.deviantart.com/art/Goddess-FIRE-97895145 ] <--easier to see the whole thing here.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 9:07 am
she's absolutely lovely, are you sure have improved!
the one thing I'd think is wrong with her, is that her arms look a tad strange to me, the way they are connected with her shoulder & neck. the way you drew her, it looks to me kind of like she's sticking her neck out. like a turtle?
anyway, I really love the way you did the fire. I never could do fire without it looking like crap so it still looks amazing to me!
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:08 pm
the real bruce wayne she's absolutely lovely, are you sure have improved! the one thing I'd think is wrong with her, is that her arms look a tad strange to me, the way they are connected with her shoulder & neck. the way you drew her, it looks to me kind of like she's sticking her neck out. like a turtle? anyway, I really love the way you did the fire. I never could do fire without it looking like crap so it still looks amazing to me!
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 1:14 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 4:56 pm
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Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:50 pm
Amazing color!
I absolutely love the background you gave it on the newest one!
The flame effect are also gorgeous~
The expression on her face is really pretty, although it could use a bit more burning emotion.
4laugh
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 6:48 pm
Thank you. And I get what you're saying for the 'burning emotion' I think. mrgreen Thanks. KazeNoSano
Amazing color!
I absolutely love the background you gave it on the newest one!
The flame effect are also gorgeous~
The expression on her face is really pretty, although it could use a bit more burning emotion.
4laugh
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