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 Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 2:17 pm
I've been touched by an Angel-
Lifted up on Wings!
I've soared through the Sky
And I've got some brand new dreams!!
I've bee Heartbroken
And I've been Downtread-
But now everything is going my way
On this brand new Day!
You can't get me Down!
You can't make me Frown!
You can't make me Cry-
And I'll tell you why!
I've been touched by an Angel-
Soaring on Wings!
I've been to the Moon
And the stars are my Dreams!
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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 6:43 pm
nice... pretty good, you missed an "n" on "been"
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 3:57 pm
^.^ This is a really happy poem. I like it! Great job rose!
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Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 3:16 pm
lol...thanx for the spelling correction....and yes it is happy....amazing, miracles do happen....lol
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