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Code Lyoko: Reboot

Kajou Takumi

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Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 3:45 pm

This is a fanfic that I thought of after season 4 finished... However, I finally got around to finishing chapter 1. I hope you enjoy it!

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Well, what did you think? Comments, suggestions, constructive criticism, compliments, questions, and concerns are all accepted. Please, though, no flames...

EDIT: I edited chapter 1 a bit, and now has full character descriptions. Also, Damian doesn't know what to do immediately. I also moved it to fanfiction.net, as the formatting in BBcode is annoying.

Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 7:45 pm

it was good the only thing i didn't like was that the main guy sounded like he knew exactly what to do but other then that it was good so more please

Tayu Yuu

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Kajou Takumi

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Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 6:56 am

Goldengame253

it was good the only thing i didn't like was that the main guy sounded like he knew exactly what to do but other then that it was good so more please

Thanks. I kinda thought that myself, so I'm going to edit him to struggle a bit more with the supercomputer and stuff. I've also been working on an outline for chapter 2, so I'll prolly have that done by sunday.

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