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 Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:03 pm
WARNING!
This has slightly graphic suicide in it.
If you can't handle it please don't scroll down.
Tell me what you think.
(No, I'm not about commit suicide...I was bored)
Enjoy ^^''
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Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:05 pm
She was blinded.
Absorbed in hatred,
Hatred of herself.
Her eyes swelled with tears
as she continues on.
Living a dysphoric life.
As she looked into the mirror
The tears rolled down her cheek.
Her eyes trailed off in digust.
In her room,
She wept for hours.
Her cheeks became sodden.
She had enough.
This life was too much.
There was nothing that would
bring her to smile.
Holding the knife high,
she saw her reflection,
unknown to her, a very sightly one at that.
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 3:14 am
I like this and just want to say, hurray for suicide poems! I think this turned out good, not meaning the ending but the poem itself, much better than the one I wrote. Look forward to reading more of your pieces.
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:28 pm
FalIenGrace I like this and just want to say, hurray for suicide poems! I think this turned out good, not meaning the ending but the poem itself, much better than the one I wrote. Look forward to reading more of your pieces. Lawl I actually just noticed I didn't post the entire poem! It was supposed to end: Biting her lip as she pressed the blade in. The blood spilled out, and she was free. Sorry! Oh and thank you so much! -luffs-
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 8:01 pm
Ah, it helps to add the end lol.
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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 7:13 pm
FalIenGrace Ah, it helps to add the end lol. Yeah. sorry for the confusion. ^^''
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