Welcome to Gaia! ::

The sun is shining
The wind is blowing
I feel the sun warm on my back.

My feet in the water
Surrounded by beauty
I jump in without turning back.

First I pick and step
And I’m cautious
But I soon forget all of that.

I’m laughing and singing
I’m playing and splashing
I’m lost in what I’m looking at.

The water is cold
But I don’t care
I’m having too much fun to see.

I swim to the shore
And I sit there and laugh
At this feeling growing inside of me.

I revel in the moment
Let the sun warm my skin
And the water is so cold that I steam.

The world just stops
Everything else can wait
Because I never want to wake from this dream.

I actually would take your advice but for the fact that it doesnt keep with the rhyming. all the rest of it just kinda flowed together in a rhyme and i didnt wanna break it.... biggrin

thanks for the advice though!