|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 9:19 pm
darkness all around me,
sadness filling the darkness, making it whole,
cold all around,
where am i?
what did i do?
why did this have to happen?
growing colder by the second,
ice glistening dangerously,
malice filling me,
contempt growing in my heart,
the cold infecting me,
consuming me, making me bitter,
to long from the light,
urge to be in the light,
the warmth,
the happiness,
all disappearing with every second,
must escape,
have to escape,
running,
endless darkness,
growing even colder,
going slower,
cant keep up, cant go on,
light in the corner of my eye,
hope,
evil ice glistening from the distance,
all the hope,
gone,
all the life left,
leaving,
happiness,
gone never to return,
sanity,
never there,
death overcomes me,
all is done.
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 10:25 am
Very deep, dark and secluded. Thats how I feel right now, good way to write it in a way so it can relate to others as well as yourself (if it was about you in any way).
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 3:10 pm
Mm, as a poem I like it ok. But I dont like it much right now because I've been happy lately and it'd be too easy for me to fall into a depression if I tried to identify with this type of writing right now.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 2:36 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
