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[WIP] TAXI!!! (Would really appreciate a redline on this.)

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Caliber Mengsk

PostPosted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 1:12 am


Hello all, been a while since I've gotten in a drawing kick at all. I just need a little bit of help on this one. I know that there are other issues, but the main thing (I think) I need help with is the hips, and I just can't figure out how to draw it right. I've redrawn the entire lower body at least 10 times, and always come out with a bad result. I would thuroughly like to finish this one as the image is really clear in my head.

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Any other C&C is also appreciated. I know the arm thats up calling the taxi's hand is too big and both hands need a bit of work. Anything else?
PostPosted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:34 pm


Well, I've worked a bit more on this. It's still not finished, but it is getting there. I liked how the hip area ended up, and the only larger issue I see is the hands need work. Here's the current pic. (I haven't finished the clothing, so it may have some problems. {like the one pant leg missing})

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C&C!

Caliber Mengsk


Caliber Mengsk

PostPosted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 12:20 am


More work was done.
Just need to figure out the raised arm/hand and the raised foot needs a small amount of work. Mostly finished IMO. Anything else you guys see wrong?

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Hopefully after fixing those I can consider this done well enough to digitally ink/color. ^_^ It will have been a while since I've been happy enough with a picture to color it.

Hope to see some crits tomorrow. Thanks!
PostPosted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 1:13 pm


its like that comercial...i forgot wat it was for, i think like deoderant or something like that, and the girl was like TAXII lol. anyways for advice i would see fix the cleavage mayb unless ur going for that look mrgreen and the chin looks lopsided. the hands look kinda small but then again i dont realli do hands so thats better then anything i can do biggrin other then that it looks great

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