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my poem: (he colen) torn

Heart_Break_Kid_2
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 5:17 pm

I am lost
I am weak
I am torn
Torn fome the world
The world i once knew
I am alone

Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 4:15 pm

Cool, short and sweet. It's really nice, perfactly dispearing.

tropical-kitten

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Heart_Break_Kid_2
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 4:58 pm

tropical-kitten

Cool, short and sweet. It's really nice, perfactly dispearing.

if u dont mind me asking y so low?

Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 3:58 pm

wow, 0o cool-ie-o
i like the fact the some how i gave me some heads up not to go out alone any more o0
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xx_Forever_Lost_xx

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Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 6:52 pm

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It was a bit too short in my opinion