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ChaosEnvoyXIII

PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 9:33 pm


Numb Inside

Don't know what to feel
Don't know which emotions are real
Am I angry or sad?
Am I upset or glad?

Body's slowly gone numb
What have I become?
Some emotionless freak
Someone who's alone and meek

Why can't I feel anymore?
Have I grown a cold core?
Is it because of all the pain?
Is it because of all the strain?

I can't feel a thing
Not even a sting
I don't feel happy or sad
I don't feel relaxed or mad

What has happened to me?
That I can no longer feel glee
What caused this loss of feeling?
When will it begin healing?  
PostPosted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 7:49 am


very good but, lose it should be loss very good otherwise...

Tseko the Living Shadow


Scazarith
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 8:45 am


I like this poem because I know this feeling, or lack thereof. You should listen to comfortably numb by Pink Floyd. Maybe even watch the video.
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