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empty_immortal

PostPosted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 10:24 am


hear is a sort of poem that i wrote but its like all over the place and i was hopeing that someone could help me if you plz?? and yes i know the spelling probebly needs work...

~The two winds~

Not shifting,
On the set of a compas,
But rageing,
Inside my mind,

The wind of right,
The wind of wrong,
One telling me this,
One telling me that,

But I know,
That the wind of wrong,
shall take me to,
The dark place,

And i dont want to go back to the dark place.  
PostPosted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 5:29 pm


I like, very nice very nice. 3nodding

UraDongwa


petitefromage
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 9:26 pm


UraDongwa
I like, very nice very nice. 3nodding

I like it as well.
It's compass, raging, and I could capitalize shall, and also the i (I). OH, and also the title.
But awesome job.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:26 pm


cool poem, I really like it. very true to life

Nari Rebel

Savage Shapeshifter

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