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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 12:48 am
I'm not going to lie, I didn't expect such a reaction from everyone. I was really just looking to vent some pent-up creativity, and RPs were going a bit slow. I'm flattered you guys like it so much .///.
I can't promise any sort of regular updates. The inspiration strikes when it pleases. But I promise, when it DOES strike, you'll have the next chapter up within the day (or two, depending on length).
I was especially surprised you all were affected by the imagery to the extent you claim to be. I've never been able to visualize, personally- that is, to be able to picture something in my head. I suppose that's why I can describe things so well with my words- that's the only way I know how.
Aaaanyway, keep checking up every now and then. I make no guarantees, but I think some inspiration will show up by the end of the week.
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:46 pm
Chapter 3: Forsaken Existence{Cue : Castle Oblivion} The moment the metallic tridents struck the doors, a deep, rumbling noise could be heard within; the sounds of heavy gears and other machinations springing to life suddenly filled the giant tower. The trembling earth beneath them seemed to cease its tumultuous churning, the winds calmed their to-and-fro motions, and even the lightning above seemed to stop as the tower, for lack of a better word, came to life. The doors were pulled inward, as if inviting the giant group inside... though all they could see was a dark hallway. The gateway was more than wide enough to fit them all, but still they hesitated. They each seemed to look at each other, and then to the Keybearers, and then to the canons that had been able to accompany them. They were at least 25 strong... they could handle pretty much anything that came their way, with numbers like that. Kyle glanced to Jon, who glanced back. The two nodded, and together stepped into the unlit foyer. However, the moment their feet touched the ground within the doorway, torches burst alight along each wall of the corridor, their flames not a bright orange, but a familiarly-sickening green. Just as the light at the top of the tower radiated no warmth, neither did these lanterns, which served only as an aid to the eyes. They paused, Kyle even going so far as to lift his foot off the ground. His eyes were rapidly skimming the lights, the decor (or lack there of), the doorway, the symbol of the door knockers, before placing his foot back on the ground. They all knew there was something horribly wrong about this place... but they also all knew that there wasn't really any choice. With no form of transportation, they were left to consort with... well, whoever lay within. "Here goes nothing," Kyle repeated under his breath before continuing forward. He personally lit his own Starlight in his palm, the Holy light also giving off a bit of the warmth this place was so grimly lacking. The walls, he could see, were not brick, but were certainly stone of some sort. Unlike brick, which had lines running throughout, this stone was more unified, with strange patterns running along it, as if it were made of the same marble or other-such-stone that palaces might have been made of. The group all began to follow in after Kyle, with Jon and Joseph right beside the light-bearer, Sora and Riku directly behind, and Cloud, Leon, and Auron taking the rear. Unsurprisingly, as the last of the group stepped past the giant doors, they closed themselves, letting in none of the outside light, or what little there had been to begin with. In the distance, the echo of a jester's laugh could be clearly heard, obviously very amused with something. Cloud muttered something under his breath before actually drawing the Buster Sword from its rear-sheathe as the group neared the end of the morose hall. Sora had run ahead to get a better look at what they could all now see. The path led directly toward another giant set of doors, though these bore no metallic knockers, no handles by which to open them. Like the walls around them, it had an almost-royal appearance about it, ornately designed and crafted. In the center, crossing over the two doors, was a single steel plaque, which Sora read aloud for all to hear: "He without power, want it not... He with power, trust it not... He with sight, heed it not... Rend illusion, unlock the true path...
Beware, Bearers of the God-Blades, tests of heart lie beyond these doors." "God-Blades..." Riku scoffed, stepping forward as he summoned his own Keyblade, the Way to Dawn. On either side of the plaque, two tiny keyholes could barely be seen, prompting Sora and Riku to take their positions, everyone else backing up somewhat. Keyblades raised, beams of light soared from their tips into the keyholes, and a singular 'click' could be heard within the door, which slowly opened up before them. The interior of the tower was far more grand than any of them could have predicted. They'd exited out of the foyer into a grand trapezoidal hall, within which they could see three podiums where statues should have stood, though only one actually remained: the other two had been shattered, their rubble lying around their respective podiums. The remaining statue was seen as a single cloaked entity, his or her face not actually etched in stone. Beyond the podiums in the center, the room's opposite wall was missing, replaced by a guard rail. Peering out beyond the railing, they could see that the rest of the tower was entirely hollowed out in the center. Their 'room' was actually more akin to a niche in the wall of the tower, making what they'd consider 'massive' look minuscule in comparison. The tower must have been at least a quarter-mile in diameter, judging by the distance across. At varying levels, and at varying sides of the tower, there were massive stone platforms; some were completely sealed off via patterned-walls (which they could now see appeared more like magical glyphs), some were almost entire rings going around the circumference of the tower, and others were just combinations of the two. What made the scene so mystical, however, was not the platforms, nor the patterns on the walls, nor the statue. The entire tower was filled with the same blasphemous light that had attracted them here in the first place. As some of them looked upward toward the top of the tower, they noted it appeared to go on endlessly until being encompassed by the forsaken rays. Another, almost familiar aspect to the tower were the massive gears, the smaller, floating platforms, and waterfalls that filled the tower. The gears were constantly moving, actually causing some of the platforms to move, revolving around the center of the tower. The waterfalls, on the contrary, were not quite so easily explained, for instead of falling, they rose; indeed, giant streams of water rose from the seemingly bottomless tower (all they could see were more platforms before endless black) and were pulled into random points at random levels of the tower. "It's almost like Hollow Bastion...," James muttered, to everyone's simultaneous approval. It did have the same appearance as the dreaded Heartless Castle that Ansem the Wise once ruled from. They peered around the grand hall for some way to traverse the tower; on the walls, there were tiny niches that seemed to be emitting their own faint lights, each a varied color. Every so often, the lights would fade, then come back a different color. However, only one person could fit inside each niche, so mass transportation was next to impossible. They were shaken from their reverie moments later, however, as the second set of doors not only closed, but slammed behind them, causing some to jump. Immediately, everyone turned to face the door... But it was in front of the statue in the center of the platform that their eyes began to focus on. Seven Corridors of Darkness opened, one after another, the final one appearing in the front and center. From the abysmal blackness, all-too-familiar foes strolled out, standing in their black, zipped up cloaks. Larxene, the Savage Nymph; Marluxia, the Graceful Assassin; Luxord, the Gambler of Fate; Zexion, the Cloaked Schemer; Xaldin, the Whirlwind Lancer; Xigbar, the Freeshooter... And Xemnas, the Superior of the In-Between. "Good evening," the silver-haired Superior greeted them, a slight smirk on his features as he addressed the large group before him without a shred of worry... not that he could have felt it, regardless.
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:54 pm
Wow good description! o_O Love the eerie green glow. And I love the color changing lights further on in the story. It just sounds really awesome to imagine. Great work on describing the place. ^^ and great song choice to go with. O_O Sent shivers up my spine while reading it... or goosebumps on my arm actually >_O? XDD
Xemnas.... you crazy baboon D<
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Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 7:36 pm
So, I didn't want to post any of my newer poetry here to disrupt the flow of the fanfic, but as is now obvious, that little muse probably won't be sparking up again any time soon. Sooooo, here's some stuff I wrote awhile back!
EDIT: Also, they're not all that good, but meh, you were warned.
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Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 7:40 pm
I Wonder August 27, 2010
Gazing into the light of the moon, I cannot help but wonder; I contemplate meanings, purposes, Reasons for existence and how we cope.
Who are we? Each of us, so individual, Unique entities so different, Yet striving to be so similar.
We are summations of reactions, The culminations of experiences. As clay, we are molded by hands, The tools of Reality, making us who we are.
But the mind wanders, Taking a turn for the unbeaten path. What would it be like, I wonder, To break? How would it feel to shatter, So completely, So thoroughly, That you are no longer yourself?
The molds we are made into may be weak, Or the grip of Existence too strong. Our experiences, our reactions, All of the things that make us, They slowly set into stone. But Life goes on.
As identities forged in the fires of Being, We are not unbending, Unbreaking, Nor immune to the strain Reality places on us.
And so, I wonder, What would it be like to break? To have oneself completely ruined By none other than the blacksmith, Reality itself?
Would we be able to pull ourselves together? Or would we, forever, remain in pieces? If together we become once more, Will the pieces be in their former places? Or will we suddenly be someone entirely new?
If we are naught but the experiences that we have lived, Then the pieces we pull together are those experiences. And if misplaced, do we see them in a different light? Does Light become Darkness? Happiness, Sorrow? Pain, Joy? Hatred, Understanding?
To become myself again; To remain forever broken; To be reborn some new entity.
As I gaze over the precipice's edge, And Reality's grip tightens around me, I cannot help but wonder...
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Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 7:41 pm
The Vagabond Soul September 1, 2010
The vagabond soul drifts onward Never looking back, never hesitating, Leaving behind curious onlookers And, perhaps, a few that care.
Where does the vagabond go? Ever the wanderer, the traveler, The soul continues forth Looking not for a place to be But a change thus far elusive.
No one place holds the gift, And so the vagabond moves on Unsteady but content with its search The soul longs for something it can't find But what does it seek? The curious onlookers wonder.
The traveler leaves imprints, And nobody remains the same Some never notice or never care But some are left abandoned.
Feelings of longing, they seek the wanderer An impossible journey, melancholy souls, The vagabond doesn't want to be found, But instead to find, To find some unknown goal.
Sleep, dear souls. Sleep and forget. The wanderer has long since moved on. Shall you not do the same? The aching will fade, the sorrow seep away, And soon the vagabond will be no more than a blur. Let slumber overtake you, dear souls, Do not seek the traveling soul Who has left you without a care.
And yet, the few who care continue. As they wander the roads onward, Time becomes irrelevant, and home a mem'ry. The contagion has completed its journey.
The vagabond souls drift onward, Unable to remember why they do so, But doing so all the same. What do they seek...?
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Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 7:42 pm
The Spiral September 17, 2010
This spiral of Sorrow, a chasm in time, How long must I pay for my ignorant crime? Where doth it end, if it does so at all? So far I have gone, still so far to fall.
Enveloped in shadow, a lively pulse slows; So far down the spiral this guilty man goes. Time loses meaning, and soul loses shine, And on down the pathway, my sins intertwine.
Connected in Malice, bound tightly by Dread, My sins and my soul are damned to be wed. Onward we march down this circular aisle; The cer'mony, in truth, a hellborne trial.
Condemned from the start, hopeless throughout, My heart shall be torn by the unending Doubt. A deafening silence is all that remains, For crushed is my soul by Agony's chains.
Why am I trapped in this helix of Pain? I followed my heart, and so was I slain.
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Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 7:43 pm
Those Haunting EyesNovember 21, 2010
And so I find within my dreams, There is a single common theme. It haunts me so, This dreaded foe, It rips and tears me at the seams.
This enemy I so despise, Has yet to fall, despite my tries; With each new year, Embodied fears All take the shape of em'rald eyes.
Their jaded glow does not relent; Their only goal is my torment. My seething heart Is torn apart; And so my dreams I do resent.
I never know when I shall find Those em'rald orbs within my mind; Like serpent's stare, These eyes ensnare, Corrupt my soul and turn me blind.
Each mortal has his sin to bear; These eyes are mine, to my despair. All that they see, They want for me; These eyes covet with every glare. [[ Author's Note : Possibly my favorite in a long, long time. And yes, the picture is relevant. ]]
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Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 7:45 pm
Lingering in the Moment January 25, 2011 And so I linger. On the precipice of the moment, I stare at the sky, its billowing grays and enveloping shadows blanketing the world. Well, at the very least my world. I can feel the security of the weather granting to me an eerie serenity seldom attained in the day-to-day mantras meant to keep my mind within its reins. This tranquility is something I cherish and savor until the final moment when it must pass; and as a human, it must always pass, and always so much sooner than I would readily let it go. But today, I have been blessed with a perpetual stillness within which all the world must surely pause. The world seems to hold its breath as the air itself is unmoving, giving no breeze to be felt by the bare skin of my neck and face. The sky sheds no personal tears as the obvious precipitation remains sky-bound, gravity having no ill-effects, leaving the ground dry. There is no light in the sky, as the sun's rays are completely absorbed by the airborne guardians, and as there is no light, there is no energy being forced into the system, no heat which inspires movement. The colors of the world around me are faded now, drained of their ever-vibrant incandescence, stripping bare the objects and creatures within the blanket of clouds. In this realm without the superfluous details, a time of mental clarity, I can see things as they are, behind their brilliant, distracting facades. I treasure such awareness, as all too often do we as humans prefer to hide behind our ever-present masks, and even though color is but a single, simplistic layer, it is one nonetheless, now vanquished by the shade, no longer drawing my attention from the details. Do not misunderstand me: I do not prefer a world in shades of black, white, and gray. Colors, and by association variety, are some of the important spices of life that make it worth experiencing in all its splendor. But just as a woman may be beautiful with make-up, is she not also beautiful without? And is it not a treat to be allowed such a view? Should we not savor it? And so I linger. The ethereal layer of clouds effortlessly float on, replaced by still more tenebrous brethren. I take a second from my reverie to glance at my immediate surroundings. I'm downtown in some nameless city, surrounded by anonymous faces heading in obscure directions to do unknown tasks. Everyone is in motion, heading toward some personal destination or finish line, hoping to accomplish some important goal in time. The rest of the world is as still and tranquil as I am; there are no birds in the sky, no squirrels fretting about. Every so often, I see a dog being walked by its owner, and to the owner's apparent surprise, the dog is not the one doing the leading, its movements lethargic as it lumbers down the sidewalk. My kinsmen, however, move on. Humanity continues forward, never pausing during times when even the world itself must take a pause, a second wind, a moment of recuperation. We are so bound by our subconscious notions of perpetual activity that it takes a conscious effort just to hold still for a few seconds time. Why do they not stop? Well, they cannot stop, some might say. Why not? There are things that must be done. Why? Others dictate that it must be so. We are stuck in an endless loop of action and reaction, the cycle driven forward by ourselves. We have no one else to blame. One man needs to do things for another man just so the second man can do things for the third, and so on until the last man in the cycle is required to do things for the first. When do they even have the opportunity to pause, they might say. And so I linger. Time is precious, and no second should be wasted. But so many have taken this to a dangerous extreme- one that may, inevitably, lead to an irrevocable burnout. It is certainly true that no second should be wasted, but what do we define as a wasted second? A moment in which no action is taken? Such a view will never grant a person peace or serenity. I believe that, as a whole, we must revise this philosophy that will almost certainly unravel us. We should add to it one that many preach but seldom follow. Time is precious. Waste none of it... but savor all of it. And so I linger. [[ Author's Note : Not a poem, but still something I wrote. ]]
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Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2012 11:20 pm
Prologue The sound of boots slowly clashing against stone echoed down the hallowed temple halls as the man made his way into the bowels of the old sanctuary. Each step seemed to reverberate a hundred times over, inviting delusions of heightened activity. These delusions hardly affected his pace, which remained slow yet steady in his descent. The spiraling stairwell was narrow enough that he could not fully extend either arm, but he did not mind; in his reverence, he ran a gloved hand over the ancient walls, inscribed long ago with countless words in the old tongues. He traced the curves and arches of the runes and symbols, feeling the ancient artists' wisdom in their scriptures. He took a deep breath, inhaling the old musk of the temple halls. Such was the treasure of hidden truths. If he were free to enjoy the simple pleasures of life, he would make his home on this hallowed ground. He could not remember feeling more at home anywhere else; not in his home city of Haloras, nor on the frozen plains of Sinkyoto, not with tropical wildlife of Ulodia, neither with the tribal customs of the Tri'vvelry Tsuvri. Something about this religious nexus called to him, nourished him, satisfied his essence in ways mortal pleasures simply could not. But such was not meant for him. He was a missionary. It was he and he alone who could bear the task of travelling the world, spreading the gospel of truth. He was a shepherd of the people, an avatar of those divinities that had for so long been forgotten by the likes of mortal men. He would save their souls, so cherished by his masters, and they would be eternally grateful. Perhaps, in time, he might even have brothers and sisters who hear the ephemeral Calling. Perhaps, he thought with barely-reigned joy, this most recent Calling would be the last he would have to pursue alone. At the bottom of the staircase, he found a set of wooden double doors. The doors were carved long ago with the eternal insignia of the gods, the familiar five-lined spirals as pristine in shape as they'd been eons ago. He paused in reverence before gently opening the doors, allowing himself into the chapel hall. Despite the last meeting of the congregation having happened countless centuries prior, the pews and the altar were untouched by the dusty layers of time. He marched onward, down the center of the aisle, the black rug cushioning his footsteps and reducing the noise he made. It was only fitting, that such holy ground be at peace. He went beyond the pulpit, passing the altar, and opened a small door hidden only by its camouflage with the rest of the back wall, and began walking down still another spiraling staircase. His boots once more began to echo, the sound travelling down to the Inner Sanctum and returning in what could only be described as a hypnotic harmony. He could feel their presence now. Here, in this sanctuary, the atmosphere was pure, charged with hallowed mana, untouched by worldly corruption. Their Calling reached him with such clarity here that he could have thought they were at his side, literally guiding him to the gifts of the devout. Oh, if only such were the truth. Perhaps, though, in time. It was not long before he found the Inner Sanctum, just as he'd last left it. It was a small, circular room made entirely of what seemed to be black, iridescent stone, similar in feeling to marble. Engraved upon the walls were endless strings of runes, the ancient symbols all faintly humming with life. In the center of the sanctum lay a single zabuton, upon which the man immediately sat in his meditation stance. In front of the cushion, opposite the entrance, was a large alcove in the wall; it was a simple archway, beyond which was simply another stone wall. For a moment, there was nothing but the humming of the engraved scripture. However, the glyphs along the walls began to glow in a faint, pale light, and the man smiled. "Oh, beloved Chosen, how you have made us proud," came an ethereal feminine voice, sultry in tone, and profoundly resonating within the sanctum. "I have only sought to bring you honor," he responded, his eyes remaining closed in reverence. "And I will continue to do so. What purpose have you Called me for today, Old Ones?""Ever seeking to please," came their response. This time, it came with the voice of young man, sounding no older than the follower before him. It was marginally higher in pitch, with an undercurrent of wisdom. "Your previous trials have proven your worth to us, young Chosen." An older man, his voice deeper with a bit of a rasp, continued on. "Your diligence to our teachings has made you strong, given you resilience. You have taken our words and turned them into actions. In doing so, we feel you have earned ascension."His eyes jolted open, their steel-blue irises reflecting in the hallowed walls. "Ascension?" he repeated, dumb-founded, before he tightly shut his eyes and lowered his head in shame. "I am not worthy for such an honor.""Perhaps not," came the voice of an elderly woman, her tone clear in her own doubt. "But we feel that experience will be your final test of worth," finished the voice of a small child. The voice seemed so young as to not yet even have a gender. "Such is our decision. Do you deny the privilege?""No!" he shouted hastily, jolting once more with eyes open and gazing longingly into the empty alcove. He cleared his throat. "No, my Glories, I will never turn down your gifts. You are all I have.""Best not forget it, love," replied the vixen's voice once again. "Step forward."The man stood, his eyes hypnotized by what he saw: the alcove slowly began to fill with a strange, bright layer of fluid-like magic, filling in from the top, sides, and bottom. When the magic covered the entire alcove entrance, it took a highly-reflective surface, appearing much like a grand mirror. He gazed into this mirror at his humbled visage: a tattered cloak enveloping the majority of his form, his thick boots to protect from the harsh conditions outside the temple, the medium-length black hair that reached his brows, contrasting with his metallic eyes and pale skin. After a few moments of silence, a shadow fell over his reflections face. A porcelain white mask began to manifest, the openings of its eyes and smile filled with the same strange, iridescent stone of the sanctum itself. It eyed him, smiled at him, greeted him with the familiarity of an old friend... "Do you accept your role as Our Chosen, Vereor Ryutetsin?" all the voices sang in an eldritch harmony that he swore resonated with his soul. "I do," he responded somberly, reaching out for the mask beyond the sanctum's reflective veil and passing through its viscous surface. He grabbed hold of his gift and pulled gently, watching as his body faded away in the reflection, itself beginning to disappear. It felt so light in his hands, yet so heavy with responsibility... no more was he a mere shepherd. With ascension came a new title and new duties. He felt ecstatic at the thought, smiling as wide as the mask as he placed it over his face. "It is our pleasure to welcome you into your new position, Prophet Xanatos," the vixen cooed to the young man. "Harbinger of the Second Coming.""No, Old Ones, my Glories," he responded, kneeling in utmost devotion. "It is my pleasure to be your humble servant. Where will you send me?""To the epicenter of deceit," the older male commanded, the runes reverberating with utmost finality. "The Valerat capitol, Haloras. There shall it all begin."--- "Not again!"A small flock of mockingbirds scattered outside the window as the young boy quickly realized he was the last one still in bed. He leapt from the sheets, landing one the carpet with a light thud. He pivoted on his feet and went straight to washing his face in the water basin on his bedside table, followed by a rapid scrub with his toothbrush in order to get all the nightly grime off that he could. Spitting the water out the window, he took one look at his armoire and turned, instead, to yesterday's robes, still lying on the floor. The next few moments were a disorganized blur of color and ruffling of cloth as he changed out of his pajamas; there was simply no time to retrieve a clean set of clothing. Slipping into his sandals and grabbing his satchel hanging on the bed post, he dashed through the dormitory's exit, heading down the spiral staircase as fast as he could manage. The stone walls and their paintings seemed to pass like blurs as he ran, doing all he could not to trip over his loose robes; something about ill-fitting clothes gnawed at the back of his mind, but he pushed the thoughts away. He could deal with stretched robes for the day. When he reached the common room, he he rushed toward the exit and leapt into the hallway outside, ready to continue onward. However, there were still numerous other students strolling the halls between classes. He took a deep breath, trying to release his tension-- he wasn't as late as he'd thought. Taking the chance the spare time had given him, he took a small detour off the main hall's path, slipping into the boy's washroom. It was empty. All the stall doors were open, and the only sound the could be heard was the steady drip of the second faucet from the end of the room, which had dripped in the same manner for at least as many years as he'd been here. Stepping up to the nearest sink, he took a look in the mirror. He'd managed to maintain the hair part down the right side of his head, but his brown hair was getting longer with each day, now covering the tops of his ears. Instead of looking trimmed and clean, his hair was beginning to look wavy and uncouth. He wasn't sure if he liked that or not. After running his hand through his hair, he let his dark-brown eyes go over his face. A few tiny scabs littered random spots, such as his right cheek and the tip of his chin; they were the result of his inability to leave his often-insignificant pimples alone. Overall, though, they weren't such eyesores on his fair skin. Forcefully grinning, he looked at his teeth, which he'd managed to clean fairly well. The small gap between his two front teeth were the main eyesore, causing him to frown. ' Maybe when Syrena attains Adept status with her Alteration...' Chuckling at the accidental alliteration, he exited the washroom, only to stop in his tracks as he heard his laughter echo down the halls. There were only a handful of students still loitering around, meaning he'd taken longer than he'd thought. Figuring it best not to push his luck, he hurried on down the hall, taking a left when he couldn't go straight anymore, passing a few more doors before finding himself in front of his Elemental Attunement class. Except the door was locked. There was a piece of parchment attached to the door. His chest tightened as he yanked at it, and reading the note only worsened the feeling: " Today's Elemental Attunement class will be held in the central courtyard." "No no no!" he shouted, tossing the crumpled paper down as he sprinted toward the nearest staircase. By this point, the halls were entirely bare, only filled with portraits, bulletin boards, and the loud slapping sound his sandals made when he smacked them across the stone floor. The heavy tolling of the bell could be heard from the city clock tower, signalling to the world that it was nine in the morning, and signalling to the students of Haloras Magicka Academia that the first classes of the morning were now beginning. He jumped two stairs at a time, and decided to push his luck by attempting the final three in one leap. He failed, as usual, but rolled forward and sprung forward, refusing to stop. And still, his pants refused to stay on properly-- not counting the many near-slips on the stairwell alone, he must have tripped twice between the foot of staircase and the double doors leading out into the courtyard. "I'm here!" he shouted as he shoved the doors open on the final chime into the central courtyard, which was a well-kept garden of sorts with various flowers and bushes, as well as a small pond in the center. He tried to dash forward down the cobblestone path and ignore his luck thus far in the morning activities, but such was his mistake. He tripped on his robes, falling flat on his face as the entire class turned at his announcement. Laughter erupted from all but the professor, who managed to silence the entire crowd just by clearing his throat. "Late again, Mr. Ashhart?" Professor Atmos sneered. The tall Ultevri's silver eyes narrowed toward the fallen 'Mr. Ashhart', and his pallid lips curled into frown. What was more worrisome, however, was that the professor's normally-braided auburn hair was loose and flowing upward due to a fiery red aura currently enveloping his limber form-- the flame attunement he was going to be teaching the class. Cormac Ashhart could feel the heat radiating off of him as he tried to get to his feet. "I take it you were having too much fun Altering your robes to notice the time?""Altering-?" he muttered with a confused look before realization washed over him, his ears turning a deep shade of crimson. It was no longer a mystery to the teenager why his robes didn't fit: he now vividly remembered using them for his Alteration practice the night before. Having grown tired and finding himself unable to reverse the process, he'd gone to bed with the intent of getting up early enough to get Syrena's help. "No, sir, I'm sorry, I'd just--""Don't bother," Atmos interrupted, flinging a small, prismatic sphere of magic at him. Cormac flinched at the oncoming spell, but felt no pain on contact. Instead, there was merely a brief flash of light, and his robes quickly shrank to their original size. He also noted that the spell had left him feeling uncomfortably warm without good reason. "Detention with me this weekend for repeated tardiness, and a demerit for Pent Dragon."Most of the student body began to snicker once again as Cormac took his spot near the rest of his Pentacle. Unlike everyone else, the three of them shared looks of disappointment and frustration; he swore he could feel Syrena's fiery eyes boring holes through his soul before Atmos continued with the lesson, while luckily Jor'thal seemed to just shrug and pat him on the shoulders with his large paw. "Now, how many of you actually practiced your attunements?"
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 6:01 pm
Your writing skills continue to astound me Kyle! (I feel like I've been gone from Gaia so long T___T) Anywhos~! beautiful work on "lingering in the Moment"! I loved the eloquence of it as well as the melodic nature it held in its words, I feel that as I read it there was a certain beat humming alongside. Even though you say it's not a poem, I could feel the prose-like qualities in it. ^^
As for "Prologue", I think it's very well written! I found myself wrapped up in the environment that you painted. From the sacred temple to the echoing hallways of the school. Amazing work on creating each atmosphere. Also, great job on creating the characters that correspond so well with their environment and making each of them their own. Even from the brief appearance/interaction with the professor, I felt as if I could already feel his personality and characteristics! XD Poor Cormac! ><
Continue writing~!!! I want to read moarrrrrr! *n*
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