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~Sightless Love~

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Beloved Ritsy

PostPosted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 9:58 pm


~Sightless Love~

Becoming sightless of our love…

I wonder how everything starts coming together…

How did we fall in love with each other then just a simple crush…?

Not knowing anything but our lips meet with our embrace…

I’ve become sightless of our love as we became one….

Having new emotions becoming jealous over little things…

I’ve begun to wonder to myself when…?

When did I ever become so clingy over you…?

Not knowing anything but seeing your loving smile towards me…

I’ve become sightless of our love as we became one….

Having mixed feelings of happiness and sadness…

I’ve begun to wonder to myself when…?

When did I ever have these urges to be with you…?

Not knowing anything I just let our love take over…

I’ve become sightless to our love as we became one once more…


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:09 am


dam... me liky... isa teh awesome jo keep up witha teh mad writing skills...

Tseko the Living Shadow


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 2:47 am


whatmore can i say than i love it? its a wonderful poem and i can't find anything wrong with it to improve, so that always means someone did a really good job. =] have you written anything else? if you have i would much like to see it.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 7:26 pm


Very nice Ritsy ^.^

Scazarith
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