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 Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:33 pm
This time, I am unsure
about what goes on and what is done
my mind goes blank with the sirens lure
her dance bring my mind too its end
blank mind unable to talk, words are wrong
I am confused I am stumped
lost in my own mind lost in her eyes
lost in her words lost her in vibe
and aura so confusing so lost
I am so confused making me so lost
save me from this world save me from myself
before I ruin it all, that I wished so hard for
makes things so wrong makes me just want to end it all
makes my eyes become sad since I missed my chance
one girl one life, confuses me so much so hard
to do the right thing
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 11:12 am
This makes me sad for you Zein. ;.;
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Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 12:46 am
Don't cause my sorrow is in those words, after all poetry is emotion put into words I put it into the ink (or pixels in this case) that make up each letter of my poem
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Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:59 am
i isa teh liken it jo...vry gute continue for good writing makeing yes?
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Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:32 am
Go to something posted her by DEvilisagoodlookingman its near the bottum I think, my old account, allot of old poems there though
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