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Chrysanthemum Moon

PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:13 pm


I’m bored. And there’s no light to read by.
So, I might as well poke at a problem
that’s been nagging me for a while.
So...
what is anger anyway?
The adults answered that
it’s when you say bad words.
But everyone I heard cursing
their mother, God, and dog
to the seventh level of hell looked so … happy
while doing it.
My friends replied that it’s an emotion.
A feeling of hostility towards something.
I didn’t have a chance to feel it though.
Hmm…
Maybe I should feel angry at this darkness
preventing me from doing anything?
But it’s so calming though, with a ever-lasting quality to it.
Maybe…
hmm…
Ha! I think that’s it!
Anger…is her face.

Those distorted features and flashing eyes of my mother when she shoved that spoon down my throat.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:48 pm


Wow. sad (i could say something, but it would be too hard to explain...)

Serenity Reed
Crew


Xahmen
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:55 am


I don't understand, therefore I can't appreciate.
I'm hazarding a guess that the narrator is a sick and bed-bound child, probably terminal.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:29 am


Hm, that's not what i got... *avoids*

Serenity Reed
Crew


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 4:54 pm


Eep. I'd be disgruntled too.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 1:46 pm


Oh I forgot there's the mom's side too. xd I'll post that as soon as possible. Maybe it'll clear up the confusion on the baby's side.

Chrysanthemum Moon

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