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Summer Morning (Another Love Poem) [C+C]

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Kaito_7420

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 2:49 am


I did post this in my other thread, but no one seemed to notice.

Quote:
Summer Morning
Written on July 31, 2008

It's still early morning
but the sun is shining
cause it's the beginning of summer

I wake up to see
your cute smiling face
illuminated by the warm, golden sun.

I reach out and stroke
your long, soft, flowing hair.
I get lost in your glowing beauty.

I pull back my hand
and, taking the chance,
I gently touch your irresistably pretty face.

Sleeping like that,
your curled up figure,
you look so absolutely adorable.

It's so hard to resist,
so I finally give in.
I hold your hands and my lips lightly touch yours.

I realized too late that
you were awake all along.
You pounce on top quickly and then hold me down.

Euphoric embrace and
a breathtaking kiss.
No time to react. I've no choice. I give in.

Utterly powerless,
I'm under your control.
I'm weakly squirming in ecstasy.

Things finally calm down,
but you're still laying on me.
I dreamily look at you and see true love in your eyes.


When I wrote this poem, I thought it would be an interesting style to make each stanza three lines and make each third line a bit longer than the others. I hope it flows more smoothly that way.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 11:14 am


That is interesting, good thinking on that. Very creative. I love this poem so much right now. It sounds like my weekend ^.^

Scazarith
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Kaito_7420

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 8:53 pm


Thanks. Anyone have any comments about the different way I wrote it? I'm more used to sticking with the usual 4-line stanzas, but I thought this way rolled more smoothly.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 11:12 am


never read anything by you before, but it reminds me on how my friend writes allot, I like it, I love how everything seems to fit together, now I wish my life was like that

The Lost Soul Zein


Tseko the Living Shadow

PostPosted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:55 am


i love it... i wish i could wake up to my girlfriends face... that would be a good morning...
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