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Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 5:22 pm

Hello everyone! C: I feel bad for not posting here anymore. DD:
And besides;;;
Most of my drawings are like fanart D: And my fanarts arn't doing so well! ( As in not getting lots of critiques XD;; ). Oh well, I guess thats what you get for drawing SouthPark fanart. =ㅂ=;; Anyway, on DeviantArt I have a friend and I absolutely LOVE how she draws her drawings C: So, I tried her style out! : D

http://onehappystar.deviantart.com/art/CookieKurama-s-Style-8DDD-93612285

I think I did well!;; But not so sure, any critiques and what not? C:

Oh and.. I did another one! C: This one is actually not in a new style, just the way I draw usually? XD

http://onehappystar.deviantart.com/art/A-Ray-of-Sunshine-92716225

It's a drawing of a.. a girl. XD I think the hand doing the peace sign is a bit off, and it looks a little.. off to me D: I have no clue why! DDD:

I guess thats all;; I usually draw SouthPark fanart and it's a rule not to post fanart in the main forum. ;o; Ohh >ㅁ<;;

Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 10:01 pm

for the first one i tihnk the ear should be lowered to near the nose line nd the eyes could be lowered too but i tihnk that style is really cute nd the eyes look awesome

for the second one omg it's so cute! i really like the coloring!
i think what's making the peace sign look weird is that her arm is too short nd it should stick out some more .. ?

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Posted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 10:21 am

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for the first one i tihnk the ear should be lowered to near the nose line nd the eyes could be lowered too but i tihnk that style is really cute nd the eyes look awesome

for the second one omg it's so cute! i really like the coloring!
i think what's making the peace sign look weird is that her arm is too short nd it should stick out some more .. ?

Thank you very much for the critique!
The ear lower? O: Okay~
Thank you, the coloring took a while! Expecially for her jeans;; xD
Ahh, now that I look at it her arm does seem quite akward;;
Thank you again!

Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 3:57 pm

here's my critique:
Both are very nice, but for the first one, you got some of the proportions wrong. The eyes are too high, they have to be in the middle of the head.
(Common mistake, dun wrry about it) and the ears too, like the other girl said. For both the drawins, your necks are a lil too long. but for the body on the second one, its pretty good. the cheek on the second one looks a lil puffy dohh... O.o

Anyways, yu did a nice job though

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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 3:59 pm

ohh yeah, the arms shud end aroudn the thigh area, cuz examine urself standing up in a mirror for help. still, I liked the coloring! smile heart

Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 8:28 pm

i love how u do the eyes :] might i just say b4 i say anything biggrin
well heres my critique thing:
for the first one the eyes look kinda high up on the head and like wat other people said the ear should be with the nose line or something like that :]
for the second one only the neck looks kinda long but thats it :] everything looks good
mrgreen love the coloring 2

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