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redmind200

PostPosted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:37 pm


when the curtains rise
a shallow voice
rings across
the empty stage

we sit and watch
to forget
for a moment

people pretend
we enjoy
what meaningless show
they create

in the heart
the pain is lost
in senseless masacre

we live to enjoy
our own fantasies
and forget
how easy we
dissappear
PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:09 am


I had to read this through twice to get the whole feeling of the piece, Red. I think you did a great job on it. blaugh Every step was precise and the use of expressive wording was wonderful. 3nodding

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