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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 10:47 am
ok, what level should i rp at, be brutally honest and point out my every mistake!
"All six of us slip in, unnoticed. 'I must remember to thank Seth when we get out.' I thought to myself. We slipped into position, and as if we we're one, six guards fell into the cold embrace of death. Again and again, we positioned our selves, again and again six guard fell. only when our grisly task was through did I chance a whisper," Seth, is the spell ready?" He nodded and breathed deeply. As we moved farther in our spells fell, and we gradually became visible. "Seth, there she is. Can you do stones that big?" I ask, unsure. Once again Seth nodded and began chanting in the spidery rune language of magic. As one, the stones disintegrated, becomeing little more than dust in the air. "Dragon, let us leave, that once again you may be a dignified and powerful creature as you we're ment to be!" I call softly." "
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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 10:59 am
Nina_hotpocket ok, what level should i rp at, be brutally honest and point out my every mistake! "All six of us slip in, unnoticed. 'I must remember to thank Seth when we get out.' I thought to myself. We slipped into position, and as if we we're one, six guards fell into the cold embrace of death. Again and again, we positioned our selves, again and again six guard fell. only when our grisly task was through did I chance a whisper," Seth, is the spell ready?" He nodded and breathed deeply. As we moved farther in our spells fell, and we gradually became visible. "Seth, there she is. Can you do stones that big?" I ask, unsure. Once again Seth nodded and began chanting in the spidery rune language of magic. As one, the stones disintegrated, becomeing little more than dust in the air. "Dragon, let us leave, that once again you may be a dignified and powerful creature as you we're ment to be!" I call softly." " we're is were, our selves is one word, guard is guards, do is vague, becomeing only has one 'e', again we're is were.
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 6:41 am
Well, your past basic. If there are anything in the intermediate role play section, I would recommend that area. Don't doubt some of the basic role plays though. Some of them actually could use to be in the more advanced area. Things are still shifting around with the new forums last I knew.
(I would like to make a note here though, if you weren't controlling all the character's in that post, you would not be able to control anyone else but your own characters. Seen as you owned and controlled all the characters, you where fine in your example. Just wanted to make reference.)
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Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:27 pm
I agree with Tesunie. Just remember to check your spelling and grammar.
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Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 11:34 am
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