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 Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 9:53 am
I'm having quite the trouble with the anatomy in this certain picture, mainly because they are leaning forward. I know the back of the man's head is too big and his hand is too small. That and the fact I put too much time into their faces when I should've been worrying about their bodies. The man's neck is also a little wonky. I'm also having difficulty on the man's right hand and what position it should be in.
Thanks a ton in advance.
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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 12:32 pm
Gulp! This is my first time posting advice. And my second time posting!
The table looks crooked to me and I think his right shoulder could be placed a bit lower and maybe a smidge forward, but, that's just me. I'm not the best with anatomy and such myself. sweatdrop Other than that, it looks great! I love the hair styles.
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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 4:41 pm
You think so, huh? I noticed the table was crooked when I scanned it in. sweatdrop
Thank you for your feedback. smile
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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 4:49 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 7:42 pm
i feel like the man's upper arms need to be longer
and his head (not just the back) might be a tad too big,
or you need to make his body bigger.
the faces look really nice though :3
i'd love to redline this, but i'm on a laptop atm w/o tablet :[
i'll see if i can get it tomorrow : D (lol bedtimes soon)
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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 11:00 pm
Thanks for your output. I agree with you wholeheartedly.
And I eagerly await your redline. c:
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 6:46 am
The guy's chest is a bit round you might wanna fix that
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 4:43 pm
Torso's could stand to be much larger, and longer.
The gril's breast bothers me a lot, it is extremely high, sitting right under her collarbone.
Breasts are generally much lower, starting closer to the 3rd or 4th rib down.
Might try a redline here in a bit...
The faces are very great, full of emotion, I can tell you ahve practiced faces a lot, and the hand!!!! heart heart heart
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 6:58 am
Once I take a good look at it, I can see what you mean.
I'll make sure to elongate the torso's and lower the woman's breasts. c:
Thanks, though the palm of the man's hand is a little short. sweatdrop
I would like to thank both you and Ghum for taking the time to comment.
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