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Captain Kit Savvy

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 6:22 pm


(Kittie Imput: This is written from two points of view...)

"It's over!",she stood in front of me with her eyes closed in obvious frustration,"Don't you understand?It's over Michael!" She stomped off away from me...down the hall...out of my house.As I watched her,I could almost feel the pressure of little feet as the gears of my mind generated the usual stack of good versus evil and put them into an almost tangible illusion.

"Let her go Michael...there are other fish in the sea...you can find someone else." The angel to my right said in a wispy voice,yet in my left ear,a rough,grisly voice counterparted.

"Let her go???Naw...get Revenge!That's the way to go...she hurt you,so why not hurt her? Huh?" A sane person wouldnt sit here listening to imaginative figments...but in this dire moment,after just having my heart broken...I was anything but sane.

"but I still love her..."I muttered,though to which one,I'm not sure of it's direction.

"Love,Shmove! She broke up...with you.She's brought this on herself.C'mon,take your revenge...you deserve it!"

"NO! Don't...just let her go.She just broke up with you,it's not like she strapped a rocket to your back and sent you to the moon!" I unconciously turned my head to the left...

"...And your rebuttel?" I asked softly. He seemed to tap his foot in thought.

"Well...that is true...but...but she did worse!She broke your heart..." Even as he seemed to stutter to think of new persuasive tactics to get me to take action,I knew he was right...in a way.She had broke my heart...and some part of me wanted revenge.

I took a step towards the door leading outside...

"Michael don't...I can see what your planning...Don't do this..."The Angel pleaded.

"Yes, do it...this is exactly what she deserves..."The red Demon snickered.

Yes,no,yes,no...back and forth...good,bad,right,wrong...

"That's her house...go on in and have your sweet victory...make her pay!"

"No Michael...don't give in..."

I opened the door,shuffled inside.No one home but her.A grin spread across my face...not my own...that of my left hand demon.

"Sophie?!" I called...my voice also that of the demon."Sophie,please come down...I just want to talk!"

Up the stairs...down the hall...to the right.A light blue door which I easilly push open. A bed with a fluffy white comforter infront of me and there is where Sophie sits.She stared up at me with wide,brown eyes before jumping up and closing the distance between us.

"Michael? What are you doing here?!" She sputtered.

The demon once again spoke for me...the voice now a mixture between mine and his,"You broke my heart Sophie...if I can't have you...no one can!"

The look of frieght on her face should have made me recoil but instead gave me...pleasure? In this moment I wanted her to pay.I pushed her down on the bed,my hands at her throat.

She gasped, "Michael...please...Stop!!!" But I didn't stop...I squeezed harder...

"Michael,you don't understand!..."She gasped more in the voice of my angel,"I had to...I"She muttered something inaudible,but I kept my hands firm until her frantic movement ceased.Realization flooded me like a tidal wave as I stumbled back...back to the door. I looked to my right...nothing...to my left nothing...to the mirror on the wall...My left Demon.Me! I began to sob...and soon the flashing lights were seen from beyond the curtain of the second story window...

Sophie's P.O.V

Walking away from him is the hardest thing I've ever had to do...the truth is I love Michael dearly...but for his own good,I had to break up with him.It would mean his life if I didn't.I'm not the right girl for him anyway.

I get home and go straight to my room to take a long awaited nap.No one will be home 'til later tonight.I lay down in my bed only to have tears come and drift me into sleep.

~**~

"Sophie!?" I sit up...that's Michaels voice...no he cant be here! If my family finds him here...this would've all been in vain.Before I can get out of bed,he's in my room.It's all a blur but before I know it,his hands are around my throat.My Michaels hands? No,this isn't My Michael.I plead with him in gasping breaths to let me go...He doesn't understand.They'll kill him if he doesnt leave.In my head I scream 'Forget about me...let me go!'.His face is blurred...not his own...I struggle for words as all is going black..."I love you!" He can't hear me...he didn't hear me...all went black...
PostPosted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 7:07 pm


wow. It was great. very good.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 7:34 pm


Black-Cat-Revenants
wow. It was great. very good.
Thank you so much 4laugh
PostPosted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 8:38 pm


*Whistles* Very good sis.

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Captain Kit Savvy

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 1:35 pm


Aron Lyght
*Whistles* Very good sis.
4laugh thankies
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