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 Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:46 am
I been rockin' the world for twelve years/
But it seems like I been killin' it for twenty/
I got more honeys then pooh bear and his buddies/
I ain't got a luvie just ah quick buddy/
They come and go just like my pocket money/
Come see me if you got some wondah/
How I pulled your chick right from under ya/
Young Muhlala is not what the call me/
It's Lil Aych a.k.a. King C/
Straight from the HBG/
Tell me how I did...
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 8:48 am
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 3:12 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:27 pm
Yeah i'm 12, so what, everybody's gotta start at some time. All I want is a ranking on my rhyme so I can see what I need to improve. I thought I turn to some older people that have some experience but I guess dat was a waste of time... mad
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:30 pm
ok dude on a scale of 1-10 that was a 0. You need help on metas, multies, wordplay, punches, and flow. Once you get those down you can improve
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 1:26 pm
Shenco ok dude on a scale of 1-10 that was a 0. Very constructive. JK
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 2:19 pm
ImShizzle Shenco ok dude on a scale of 1-10 that was a 0. Very constructive. JK
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 4:53 pm
Shenco ImShizzle Shenco ok dude on a scale of 1-10 that was a 0. Very constructive. JK Simon...................
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 4:57 pm
ImShizzle Shenco ImShizzle Shenco ok dude on a scale of 1-10 that was a 0. Very constructive. JK Simon...................
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Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 9:59 am
Thanx Shenco, I'm new at this rap stuff usually a draw, so it might take me a minute.
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 2:44 pm
Shenco ImShizzle Shenco ImShizzle Shenco ok dude on a scale of 1-10 that was a 0. Very constructive. JK Simon................... LIES!
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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 8:52 am
Lofl @ "I got more honies than Pooh bear and his buddies" xd .
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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 3:26 pm
Shenco ImShizzle Shenco ImShizzle Shenco ok dude on a scale of 1-10 that was a 0. Very constructive. JK Simon................... You better not be a fat a**. TRIBEEE!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 11:22 am
Jaiden Stryker Shenco ImShizzle Shenco ImShizzle Shenco ok dude on a scale of 1-10 that was a 0. Very constructive. JK Simon................... LIES!
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 11:59 am
ImShizzle Shenco ImShizzle Shenco ImShizzle Shenco ok dude on a scale of 1-10 that was a 0. Very constructive. JK Simon................... You better not be a fat a**. TRIBEEE!!!!!!!!
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