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  Woo. I LOVE sentime--.....why isn't there another option?! Noooo.
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KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 5:50 am


We stand on the rooftops
Looking at the sky
And listening to the sound of trains
And change
As it all rushes in.

I have learned now to
Heed the words
Of the wise man who told me to
Fill myself with wonder
Stuff my eyes with beauty
And find the true value
of everything ordinary.

Each day is much the same
In the summer’s heat;
But life is not a video game--
You play the same level every day
Never quite reach the end
And it is up to you
To find
And make
The subtle changes
That keep track of days
And revel in them;
Become intoxicated by
Everyday adventures.

I don’t learn much anymore;
The lessons from school never quite
Adhere to the slippery surface
And I could never recall the date.
But there are some things
That are chanted to me
Again and again
In my sleep
In the peaceful moments of silence
Teaching me with mistakes
And encouragement
And endless
Repetition.
Learn your lesson; life tastes sweeter then.

I’ve come to listen for
Aristophane
Whispering in my ear;
Each twist she is there
She controls the stars
And the sun
But only guides me
As I walk my path.
I delight in the voice
That brings guidance and wisdom
And sounds remarkably similar
To my own.

As we stand above the world
And stuff the new dawn into our hearts
I glance at you
And see your eyes filled with thoughts.
I smile
And ponder who whispers what
In the silence of your heart.
“What are you thinking about?” I tease.
As the sun rolls clumsily out of the clouds--
Aristophane, it seems,
Is distracted.

You smile. You say:
“Tell me what you think about
Being honest….
About being honest with
Yourself.”
PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 10:01 am


I liked this. And it's not emo. Therefore, excellent.

Also, I love that you spoke to Aristophane.

d e s d e m o n o
Crew


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 4:19 pm


Wooooo.

And um...you do know who Aristophane is, right? Cause I mean, most people think that's the greek guy. 'Tisn't. That's the name for my Goddess.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 5:53 pm


rolleyes Yes, dear Kirby. I know.

d e s d e m o n o
Crew


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 6:54 pm


O.o HOW?
PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 8:08 pm


Ahem. See, for reference: "She controls the stars and the sun but only guides me as I walk my path." Sounds pretty goddess-like to me.

d e s d e m o n o
Crew


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:31 pm


Oh. dude. THat freaked me out. I don't really talk about her much. Eheh.

You ish smart. :Heart:
PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 12:23 pm


three words to this...


I was entranced o.O

I couldn't stop reading once I started

I like the part at the end with being honest with yourself
and I also loved the part with enjoying everything ordinary.


this...was reeeaally really good.

X-Lord-Zero-X


Voxxx

PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 11:11 am


heart
PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 10:56 pm


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Beauty. <3

You've been doing a lot of Takky-esque writing lately. I like the kirby-flavored Takky. =^w^= Much interesting taste.
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Gomenroia

PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:19 pm


KIRBY!!!


That was awesome ^^
PostPosted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 7:24 pm


redface sweatdrop

you guys are too nice.

KirbyVictorious

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