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My Feelings for You

Here I am, reciting this,
Only waiting for a kiss.
A kiss from someone very special,
Very kind and very helpful.
Long before in my lonely state,
The only thing I felt was hate.
Hate for those who were unfair,
Hate for those who showed no care.
Then it left, replaced by sadness,
Sadness where I felt so friendless.
Sadness that left a permanent stain,
And also caused a lot of pain.
But now I really wonder why
The world just doesn’t want to try
To give me one wish, just one wish,
that’s nice and small just like a fish.
But ever since so recently,
I’m just not feeling as lonely,
And it’s all because I have found you,
So here’s my wish. Just please come true!
I want you to understand my love
For you, the girl even cuter than a white-feathered dove
I’m not that good at poetry –
Can’t think of rhymes for tree.
But I’m trying out this special way
To express to you what I want to say.

I love you.

Lol! I really liked the last bit there with "poetry/tree". Very nice. Yeah, this is a good poem especially considering it was your first and with no knowledge of poetry. I believe that expression in poetry, or even just writing, is more important than whether it rhymes or how its written. Keep writing ^.^