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 Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 9:27 pm
Wow, I haven't been here in a while. Hope you've guys been good.....
Catch the drift, join the flow
Just drift along, let no fear show
Go sideways, up,
slantways and down
Hurry and move before your chance is blown
Me and you,
Hundreds of miles apart
Oh, don't you worry,
I'll always be in your heart
But take a drift,
jump the border
we won't stay young,
we'll just get older
Don't move slow,
Don't take your time
Airplane tickets don't
cost only dimes
But I don't care
It'd be worth much
We'd hold hands and each other
and kiss and such
I'll kiss your hand,
make you silently purr
I'll treat you with
love that is pure
Just hop the border,
me and you between laylines
Me and you,
where the real country hides.
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Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 9:55 pm
Nice poem, I like that the short lines make the poem go by faster.
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Le Duke of Undertaker Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:12 pm
It was good in it's message, though a bit odd at points with how the sentences worked out. It starts off a bit sad, but ends on a sweet note. I'd say, good job! smile
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