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Zuko: D< why arent you training?
Aang: biggrin break time!
Zuko: >.< comet=three days! how are you going to kill the fire lord if you dont train? scream
Aang: v.v actually....

I want to be a writer. (duh.)
Here is what I wrote/edited:

Zuko had stumbled upon something... predictable.

Aang, the avatar, had stopped his training. The young twelve year old boy's butt sat on the steps to Zuko's old vacationing home. Aang and his loyal friends were chatting it away as if this war was behind all of them.

Zuko stormed forward. Aang couldn't give up his fire bending training so close to the comet! His feet kicked up dirt and sand until he stood infront of the group that he had come to hate.

"Aang! This is rediculous, why arn't you training?!" He scowled as he forehead began to form wrinkles and creases.

Aang looked at the hot-tempered man with big childish gray eyes. "We've been training all day, Zuko." He whined lightly as he made a small air ball in his hands. "I need a break."

"This is the millionth break!" Zuko yelled, more aggitated than before at the young monk's words. "Look, the comet is in three days! If you don't train how will you expect to kill the fire lord?!" He clentched a fist but then looked at the rest of the team's face. Some looked away, other about to say something. "Well?!"

"Actually Zuko... I was thinking of taking down the fire lord after the comet..."

Anything additional you would like to add: Not really.. other than I'm horrible at editing. Oh also, what kind of format is this going to be in? Like everyone writes a little bit or rp style?

Sweet I think that way will be more interesting and fun. smile

Um...for the editor position, do you want us to completely edit that post, as in rewrite it, or just fix the grammatical errors and nonsensical bits? Also, is the rest of this forum open for individual fanfiction and stuff?

I want to be an: editor (although I wouldn't mind writing either. >>; ).

Here is what I wrote/edited:

Zuko didn't know if he could take this much longer. He tilted his head back and stared at the intricate design on the temple roof, his eyes following the curving pattern until they lost themselves somewhere in an arcane spiral. Maybe if he couldn't see the kid screwing up, he could restrain his temper. Maybe.

Needless to say, it didn't work.

"What the hell was that?! It looked nothing like my demonstration. Were you even watching?"

This was no time for being polite. The world was at stake and Aang was just...blowing him off! What was wrong with him today? Wasn't the Avatar supposed to be almighty and wise somewhere in that thick tattooed skull of his?

Aang winced slightly at the sudden outburst before looking down at his feet.

"You shouldn't swear, you know..." He glanced up at his teacher, noting that that probably hadn't helped. "But I'm sorry, Zuko, really. It's just that we've been working so hard, and..."

"Sorry? 'Sorry' isn't good enough. The comet is coming, whether you're ready or not. This is no time for acting like some stupid kid!"

Zuko turned his back to Aang in the hopes of regaining his temper. If Uncle were here, he would reprimand him for the outburst. Knowing Uncle, he would be right. He knew that he should take into account that Aang couldn't have the strength, stamina, and wisdom of the Avatar all the time, but he just couldn't. He was doing the boy a favor, after all. Aang had to be able to push through this problem too, for the sake of the world. A quiet voice disrupted his perfect theory.

"But I am a kid..."

The firebender sighed. If only Aang knew how aware of that Zuko really was.

Anything additional you would like to add: Mmm...I'm a grammar freak?