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"You, and your machine" [lyrics]

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Le Duke of Undertaker
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 3:42 pm


You'll need a Battery (a mind)/
Some Wrapping (the skin)/
and a Frame (skeletons!)/

The wires should come with the Carcass,/
rage is needed to fuel it in./
This will depend on patience and time/
for this time to begin.../

The internal clock is ticking/
Time is slow and death is so near/
Unknown fear is just sort of risen/
the time of reckoning has to begin/
Mass produce the product/
rinse and repeat/
your army of non-dead zombies/
will meet no defeat/

You have created a monster/
oh dear mr.Hyde/
you have created a monster/
dont you wish you'd have Died!/

Creatures of Flesh, Death, Pain and Bones/
calling your name!/
No place to Hyde, nowhere to run/
Tell me sir,/
what have you done?/


they turned against you,/
they have grown their own minds/
soon you and your machine will wither and die/

Well i have front row seats to this horror fest/
i admit i cant complain./
but your ego has consumed you/
and you, their ultimate creator, will be done!/




(I would like to say that punctuation/capitalization in the lyrics means something completely different than what it normally depicts, and also that this was written by more than one person.)
PostPosted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:16 pm


I just knew this was written by more than one person. There are points where it sounds like you, Duke, and other's where it drip in concise coherency. I was thinking you a bit mad in the brain before I read the end statement. A good work by you and those others. 3nodding

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Le Duke of Undertaker
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 8:53 pm


Well it was two people really, this song was never recorded properly, I might try to do it by myself, or maybe I'll try to get some friends and record it with them.

I'm not crazy...I just think too much. 3nodding
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