I am hoping that maybe I can change this story into a saga of 'novelettes' but we'll have to see about that. Dark Angel is generally an anime-induced story which deals with a demon exiled from hell and that same demon having to discover what he is, and how he gains power just by absorbing souls unlike other demons.
First off, to clarify some issues. I understand the title isn't too original. It's the title of a sci-fi and a manga, though when I wrote it I didn't bother to look, since I don't hope to sell my work anyways. Secondly, I also know the beginning starts out with a lot of action, but that's not because I was running out of ideas. Just anime-induced excitement on my part, but there is and will be story behind it! Along with story, I hope to delve more into the world in the story, and describe the hierarchy of hell and such.
Sounds almost demonic, I know, but egh... It's just good, fun fiction that some friends have enjoyed reading. Hopefully you all will too, though I am up for some constructive criticism and ways on how I could improve ^^; (provided with example of course)
I've separated the journal entries in my other account and labeled them as 'acts', like those in a play. While on the journal, I had listed them as separate chapters, I think they're too small to make separate chapters... All together, the following acts make up chapter 1:
First off, to clarify some issues. I understand the title isn't too original. It's the title of a sci-fi and a manga, though when I wrote it I didn't bother to look, since I don't hope to sell my work anyways. Secondly, I also know the beginning starts out with a lot of action, but that's not because I was running out of ideas. Just anime-induced excitement on my part, but there is and will be story behind it! Along with story, I hope to delve more into the world in the story, and describe the hierarchy of hell and such.
Sounds almost demonic, I know, but egh... It's just good, fun fiction that some friends have enjoyed reading. Hopefully you all will too, though I am up for some constructive criticism and ways on how I could improve ^^; (provided with example of course)
I've separated the journal entries in my other account and labeled them as 'acts', like those in a play. While on the journal, I had listed them as separate chapters, I think they're too small to make separate chapters... All together, the following acts make up chapter 1:
