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 Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:28 am
Hey, Everybody! blaugh Seems like it's been a while since I've actually been active in here. I was just unmotivated all week. To do anything. So yeah. Hope I didn't miss too much. Anyway, about a week ago I had promised Wicked Lilith Thing that I'd draw her, but I ended up not feeling like drawing. In fact, I ended up just getting frustrated whenever I tried to draw, but the day before yesterday I went into my favorites on dA and I was motivated. This is what the conclusion was once I finished. I'm proud of my coloring job. mrgreen It was a lot of fun to do. Beats bein' irritated. Anyway, I'd like to know what you all think. I know of a couple flaws that I was just too unwilling to go back and fix, but I'd like to know if there is anything else you guys see. rofl
I think it's an appropriate size. ♠  Oh. And I'm not going to curve that tattoo 'cause I'm just so darn lazy, so please don't recommend that I do so. ninja
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 6:47 am
I wish I could draw that well... *stops drooloing* Anyway.
The horn on our right looks like it is curved at a slightly akward angle? I'm not sure. The one on our left looks almost directly above her ear, but the one on the right, with the way it is curved, would be behind the ear, I think. Also, they seem to be placed on top of her hair, not coming through it.
The shading on her corset looks a little off, but I'm not sure why... sorry >_<
Her fingers are a little long and thin compared to her palm, and she seems to be pressing the pipes against herself rather than holding them, but both may be intentional.
And, that's all I can see. smile
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 7:47 am
oh my gawd its like amazing eek i love how u did the eyes.
ok here r the critiques. like wat Kannachan13 said, the corset looks off...mayb the build of it but idk. the fingers look really long but then again i usually dont draw fingers on my people so it might just be me biggrin last thing, the arms look a tad bit long but not like OMG THEY ARE SO LONG WAT WERE YOU THINKING lol.
other then that its like amazing mrgreen
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 7:57 am
Aside from what's already been mentioned, her breasts bother me.
Like, it looks like she should be a busty gal judging by the left breast, but then with how you've shaded the corset, her right breast is MIA. Cover the other half of her chest and she's now a man.
Also, the rope/ribbon/whatever of the corset should kinda poke outwards and then curve back in under the breasts to help indicate her bustiness~
I really like the hair, but I think it could use some more dark shades in it ^_^ Even white hair has it's dark bits~!
Lastly, her right arm seems too... straight? She's obviously a very thin lass but she should still have a bit of curvature for her muscle ^^
Still, good job biggrin
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 4:31 am
Zucci__zookeenee Like, it looks like she should be a busty gal judging by the left breast, but then with how you've shaded the corset, her right breast is MIA.
This should go in my sig lol
Anyway, very nice. A lot of things that people mentioned didn't bother me until they were mentioned. Her horn curvature, arm length, and the shading of her corset seem alright to me, although maybe you could make her breast a little more obvious. Now that it's mentioned, the fingers are a bit long. Other than that, there's nothing really off or very distracting from the picture. Again, very nice.
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Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 2:04 am
She doesn't really look like wicked to me. She seemed like she's smiling. lol.
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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 3:47 pm
Sorry I haven't replied. I went camping right after posting this. Anyway, thank you for all the critique. It has been very useful. 3nodding
Kannachan13: Thank you for the compliments. And the critiques. And the for the horns, I know they were kinda awkward; I spent FOREVER on them trying to get them at the proper angles but no matter what I did they looked weird, so there was no helping that. sweatdrop And I almost forgot to totally put them on (so that's why they look like they're on top of the head) but thank you for clarifying the whole positioning of them.
oxellebellxo: Also thank you for the compliments and critiques. The corset was also really difficult for me and I think I figured out the whole shading thing that was pointed out. Or at least, I think I see the solution to that problem. And the arm could possibly be a bit too long. I didn't have the whole body here so it was kinda hard to judge. mrgreen
Zucci__zookeenee: sweatdrop Awwwwww.... The poor girl. I botched her breasts! eek How could I do such a thing! gonk I definitely see what you mean now. *sigh* And for the corset thingie, I wanted it to be a smooth one (not one that actually molds to the person's body) so that's why it doesn't do that. But I probably should at least bring it in a little. Thank you! And for the hair, I will definitely watch that. And hopefully fix it. Same with the arm.
Kaizo_MK: You're funny. rofl Yeah, the "breast" was quite an issue for people. And I have come to see the problem (" I can see clearly now, the rain is gone...." *stops singing*). And the fingers. I know. I just tend to make long fingers on people when I draw hands. I'll have to work on that. sweatdrop And thank you. mrgreen ♠
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