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 Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 7:54 pm
Lost and Confused
I walk the cold streets
No one likes me
They all hate me
But why do they hate me?
The wind is ironically strong
My dreams are strangely real
I need a blow to the head
It’d wake me up again
I close my eyes
But nothing happens
I’m daydreaming again
The bitterness I make myself
Is too much for me to bare
As [the] wind picks up,
My feet walk faster,
The people stare more,
I feel powerfully happy
I think I’ve lost my mind
But maybe I haven’t
Is there nothing I can do
When I can find myself?
Another walk on the streets
Another day of sadness
When will this madness end?
When will everyone understand?
I need to know.
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:05 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:53 am
There was a lot of emotions... 2 thumbs up.
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:55 am
Thanks. That isn't as good as I wanted it to be but I like the outcome of it.
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:57 am
Talidestra Wolf Thanks. That isn't as good as I wanted it to be but I like the outcome of it. Well when I was as young as you I couldn't even write anywhere close to that.
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:58 am
Lord_Von_Revenants Talidestra Wolf Thanks. That isn't as good as I wanted it to be but I like the outcome of it. Well when I was as young as you I couldn't even write anywhere close to that. My friends say I have good poetry, so do the guests at the inn my mom owns. And my mom's friends. Yeah, basically everyone.
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 9:57 am
Talidestra Wolf Lord_Von_Revenants Talidestra Wolf Thanks. That isn't as good as I wanted it to be but I like the outcome of it. Well when I was as young as you I couldn't even write anywhere close to that. My friends say I have good poetry, so do the guests at the inn my mom owns. And my mom's friends. Yeah, basically everyone. Same here, but its odd since I didn't even know how to write till I was 9 or 10.
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:01 am
Lord_Von_Revenants Talidestra Wolf Lord_Von_Revenants Talidestra Wolf Thanks. That isn't as good as I wanted it to be but I like the outcome of it. Well when I was as young as you I couldn't even write anywhere close to that. My friends say I have good poetry, so do the guests at the inn my mom owns. And my mom's friends. Yeah, basically everyone. Same here, but its odd since I didn't even know how to write till I was 9 or 10. Really? I only started poetry, parodies, and such with writing about three or four years ago.
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