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youaremineforever

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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:11 pm

Ok so this took me about an hour or so and it was my first drawing out of paint please feel free to tell me what you think about it...

Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:30 pm

its a good eye, but you may have been able to symplify the process for pieces like the eyebrow with the polygon tool, like so:

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i would have filled it in, then rounded out the corners, and you'd be good to go.

btw, its not really a manga style eye is it? it looks like real life was intended.

chron_121

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chron_121

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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:32 pm

oh, and the pupil should be at the center of the eye.

Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 9:30 pm

Yeah but if you notice that some people when they look at things their pupils move too.... Thanks....Umm...this was my first project and it will definately be better next time.

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Zucci__zookeenee

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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:26 pm

The pupil itself is fixed within the center of the iris, it never moves; only changes in size depending how light or dark the surrounding is.

"giant eye" pictures are kind of hard to give any advice on, since there's usually not much to them.

The eyebrow is far too close to the eye, however. I mean, if you look in the mirror are your eyelashes practically touching your eyebrow?

Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:51 pm

it would have been better if u put more shade and light into ure eyes
make it shine =]
i like it blaugh
its good for a first timer mrgreen

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youaremineforever

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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 12:00 pm

Thanks...I will put that into consideration next time I do this again if I do...

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